reely funny and cool RELY like the ending ending with Skuld hehehe i give it 10 out of 10

skuld has 2 stay with Duo he!he!he!

Amazing, it was long, sweet, and funny at the same time.

Dark Magician Boy

Well well well, how is it going my old friend Mallow64? Judging from the story perhaps not so well? The funniest part of this was at the end after the story when you said "...this was supposed to be purely a comedy..." That made me laugh, so good work on that!

I have noticed in the years that you have improved your grammar a little bit, however! Before you would probably not have any punctuation at all in a sentence such as this:

"Belldandy: Zero System, the name given to a cockpit system that quickly calculates battle data and feeds the large amount of statistics on estimated values directly back to the pilot but this system also drives the pilot to his limits to the extent that he no longer fears his own death thus helping him gain absolute victory.."

However you used two periods at the end instead! This might be strange consider three is an ellipse and four is needed to end the sentence, but in any case it is indeed an improvement! Good work, Mallow64!

Very funny it had a good mix of humor and seriusness that I like to see in a fan fic, it seems to have alot of the attitude of the manga which i really like ( compared to the overly serius fan fics i see to often or the ones that are just down right depressing ) I hope you will continue it and keep it in the same tone of storyline.

Wow, this was a cool story, the heck with the grammar.

Aside from the grammar and punctuation mistakes, this was a funny and wonderful fic! You should be proud to have written this! Nice fluffy K/B, and plenty of mecha action! Oh by the way, in a manga I read gundanium apparently repels all energy, whether magical or otherwise from it, at least to a certain extent. Great story, and keep writing!

That was pretty freaky...

Okay that ending was worth the pricew of admission alone... Duo stuck with Skuld? -snicker- I could just see the mayhen those two would create. Nice job on the story too (Yay, Aoshima is spare molecules LOL)

Awww, this is sweet. Bonus points on the funny ending, too.