Reviews for The Tale of Rumia - Hero of the Shadow
Warthogs309 chapter 113 . 7/6
Ok. That was just fucking amazing, a very good story all in all. It was great at the beginning, and then just kept getting better and better as it went on. And the final arc? That was some dragon ball super shit happening. And even though this went in an almost completely different direction than cannon. It's fantastic! it's basically just another timeline than the main series! For real I would've paid money to read this if I could. This was THE best touhou fan fic I have ever read so far. And all I can really ask is "Please write more!" Only real criticism I have is spelling in some places. But other than that, PERFECT!
TheGamemaniac chapter 113 . 9/14/2018
Well now that was a good story to chug through.
Epilogue seems kinda fallout-ending esque, which loses a bit of impact by the nature of not being a video game though.
kinigget chapter 61 . 5/28/2016
Well...
That was unexpected
kinigget chapter 10 . 5/21/2016
...I think I'm beginning to understand
Yuki Kyuu Aizawa chapter 75 . 10/20/2015
sorry say I like the storm bringer Rumia uses
Marquis Joy chapter 113 . 7/27/2015
One of the most beautiful stories I've ever read
You did a fanfuckingtastic job with this
Truly a work of art
where some as lowly as rumia become a hero whom the weak look up too
from one who should be feared to one who should be admired
It would be great to see a sequel to this fucking amazing story
Cloy552 chapter 113 . 1/18/2015
This was a wonderful story and I am very glad I read till the end. Kind of sad the three Oni died but the way they went was too funny to worry. Especially since their buddy also lived...er unlived underground.
The only remaining question is if Alice was too tsundere or Marisa was too oblivious for them to be called a couple.
Cloy552 chapter 68 . 12/24/2014
Well that was cool. And I misspoke zorta in my last review 'of course she would look like yuuka since yuuka was her container for howeverlong'
Cloy552 chapter 67 . 12/24/2014
Oook I get it now. The purple wings threw me off since Nue usually has three red and three blue... which I really should have noticed made purple. Then I also should have remembered Yuuka is the goddamn FLOWER youkai and should have realized it was her instead of thinking oh it just looks like yuuka. I feel like an idiot.
Cloy552 chapter 61 . 12/24/2014
TT dammit Yukari. I'm sorry I didn't trust you. Stupid Yumemi and her stupid...stupidness
why would you kill Yukari!? Who else is supposed to be the supertroll of gensokyo? Who is gonna fix the fourth wall when Kogasa breaks it? How am I supposed to take a break before the next arc when you leave it here?
Cloy552 chapter 46 . 12/24/2014
Goddamnit Yukari. You planned for Rumia to die! Also,Yay Shinki!
Cloy552 chapter 39 . 12/23/2014
Goddamnit Rika! And Rumia! And lets blame Yukari also!
This is why you don't let the gen9cidal asshat live! Or at least lock them up in maximum security prison for the rest of time. Or have Yukari stuff her in a border.
Also a little late but yay! Kogasa and Kaguya are getting along awesome! Kogasa always needs someone to appreciate her special brand of awesomeness.
Cloy552 chapter 32 . 12/23/2014
Once again: Goddamnit Yukari!
Cloy552 chapter 31 . 12/23/2014
I... don't think it works like that but it's so funny I really don't care. Mokou's the best simply because she is so very abusable in stories (although I do really like her personality- at least fannon wise still working on IN)
Cloy552 chapter 29 . 12/23/2014
God damnit Yukari.
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