I realise that the three (Naruto, Mikasa and Armin) are a lot like Nagato, Konan and Yahiko. Yahiko dies and leaves Konan and Nagato behind to accomplish their dreams (well in this case Naruto's and Mikasa must in a sense, "protect" Naruto).

On another note I really like your story!

I can only say Minato wouldn’t be even close to as good as Jiraiya at fuuinjutsu if it wasn’t for Kushina. Plain and simple. No FTG or anything. He’d just be a dude with rasengan and speed. So yeah he was good at fuuinjutsu but not good enough to crack FTG and make his own formula. He’s an A rank ninja without it. So him choosing mikoto is basically him not getting strong. I get it’s your story I just felt like saying that.

thank you that is my most hated pairings

I 100% agree with what you're saying regarding the hole pairings thing I've read other author having the same problem just do u

Naruto isn't Naruto without ramen I most say this saying could not be more true

Very good story well thinking and planning good job

I'm confused so far the description has absolutely nothing to do with the actual story.

All your thing about modernized armament seems kinda ridiculous for me.
You don't seem to clearly understand the strength and the speed of a kunai or a shuriken launched by jounin.
True, it may be faster than one throwed by a genin or chuunin, but I have troubles seeing it as faster than one launched by a jounin. With chakra, ninja are basically superhumans. Don't forget that.

Since when tree walking is jounin chakra control exercise ? It's genin level you know.
Like, it's literally one of the first thing they learn as a genin. True, it wasn't the case with Naruto's team, but they had Kakashi and Kakashi never teached them anything, be it Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu or even basic ninja skills such as infiltration, assassination, tracking... The only thing he ever teached them is the importance of comrades, of a team and tree walking (and that only because he was forced by the circumstances).
As far as I'm concerned, Kakshi was the worst teacher ever and that's why that's one of the characters I really can't to bring myself to like.

But to come back on track, tree walking is a genin level exercise, definitely not chuunin and even less jounin.

Well, you talk a lot about pairing (or rather the demands of readers about it), but as far as I'm concerned, it should be a secondary thing (if it's not the topic of the fic of course).

That's why I think no pairing is good. Now, the thing with pairings, is that I don't really care about the pairing, but if it's a pairing I don't like, it can make me stop. I know I might seem to contradict myself, but not really. I have not a particular pairing I would prefer, but there does are pairings I really don't like (Naruto/Temari for exemple).

But once again, it depends of the character of the partner in this story. I mean, I might not like her (or him for the matter) on the cannon, but depending on the personality change you might make him/her, I might get to like him/her. That's why I do not think it's useful to propose pairings to the authors.

However, I might list the pairings that went pretty well on several fanfics :
Naruto/Hinata (once gotten rid of her shyness), Naruto/Ino (mature of course, not fangirl), Naruto/Haku (she was a girl though), Naruto/Anko, Naruto/OC (depends of the OC), Naruto/Kurama (in human form that is), Naruto/Itachi (she was a girl though).
Well, the list continues (there was quite a lot of successful pairings), and that's why I think it's useless proposing pairings, as if the author makes a good job, any pairing can end up good (or not for some readers, as one can't satisfy everyone).

Phew, that's some serious AU. Usually, when we want Naruto to have the Sharingan, we make Minato an Uchia (more often than not, Madara's son), but your fic clearly doesn't stop here.

Minato is Tobirama's grandson is Minato (well, I'm not sure about this one, I guessed it based on the synopsis and supposing you probably wanted Naruto to have the Rinnegan)
Minato and Kushina aren't together
Minato and Mikoto are together
Mikoto is clan heir
Shisui is Mikoto's little brother
Hiruzen and Kagami were on the same team
Hiruzen doesn't dislike the Uchiha anymore (at least, I guess that will be one reason less to hate him)
Itachi and Sasuke won't be born anymore OR Itachi will be Naruto's big bro OR They will still be born with another mother (just like Naruto actually)
Naruto won't be orphan anymore (no more Kyuubi attack during his birth)
Even if Minato and Mikoto somewhat die, he will still have Shisui and Kagami

I guess that somewhat makes it. I added some suppositions but it's indeed really original.

you keep on saying that people think that naruto is too but actually it's the opportunity naruto is weak you have given him so many different abilities but he doesn't have power you just hype it all up for no reason and you can't write a God damn fight scene without showing how retarded you are

What Baku said about the seals on their bodies turning them into vapor isn't right since Naruto's supposed body was brought home and Armins body had to be destroyed

I thought that they were just 7 year olds? I can't see two 7 year olds kissing because of adrenaline from a fight or flight situation.

It’s a great idea for a story but the execution is just I don’t like how things from attack on Titan are in this it ruins the emergence plus I don’t like even the idea of a romance at 8 years old I don’t think its good story telling due to the fact that I believe that you should have taken the time to form bonds between Naruto Mikasa and Arlet before you tried to form a romance and should have focused on friend ship and I need a reason to why Minato is so strict and has a different character then then the original story because if he never grew up with tobirmama and I don’t believe that he’d just be strict because of who his father was. And that’s really my only complaints but yeah it was a okay fic I guess.(note I only read to chapter 15 so some of the problems could have been fixed but whatever and sorry if I misspelled the names)