This was so adorable(: I loved it! These two are one of my favorite pairings from all final fantasy games. They just make such a cute story! Anyways, Loved the way you write! I couldn't stop smiling!

that was good I enjoyed it

I really, really liked this. And I'm displeased how it got no reviews *glares at FFXIII archive* A lot of people prefer Hope x Light and Fang x Light around here, so maybe that's it. Because your writing style has a very nice flow to it, and I loved what you did with this overall theme. There were a few silly editing mistakes, but other than that, this was brilliant. There aren't many Hope x Vanille pairings and being a huge fan of said pairing, I was thrilled to find this and even more so one that held my interest to the end. I like how you included some "Oerba" culture with Fang and Vanille, a reference to an arranged marriage (Vanille and Vincent). But most of all, I like how this story started and how the events just moved with one another. Really great job :) I'm definitely adding this to favorites.