Oh my God, a favorite for me.

Oh how sweet thanks for the read

If only it would have happened in the serie, when they dance on "more than words" 3
Perfect as usual!

Great little piece of fiction. I loved that she asked if he hypnotized her...nice touch.

I have to say, I love your stories. I'm going back and catching up on what I've missed. They are so sweet and light. Just perfect for right before this Sunday.

lovely! :3

Touching. You really examined the unstated longing these two characters fell for each other. (At least in my head!space). Thank you for sharing your talent with me, and the rest of the internet, it is appreciated.

Beautiful, sweet... I almost thought I was there! Very, very good job!

Oh God. You just set me up for heart break and immense sadness and tears for months if whatever happens between Jane and lisbon in season 6 is anything short than this.

I love it! This fic is one of my favourite! Congrats, it's really good! Are you going to write a sequel? :)

AWESOME

The story was sweet, had meaning. And in some way it was different! I Loved it! :3

TeddB

OH !
Oh oh oh oh oh ... Now THAT was gooooood !
I mean ... Bittersweet love, sure, but so refreshing !
These two will always get me :-P
Jane's point of view on it was awesome, loved it. We get to experience what happens in this genius/mischievous mind of his, his hidden inner thoughts, his confessions ... His feelings! And that was great !
Lisbon, described as she was, could have easily gotten any man under her spell ! Seriously ... Green shirt, skirt YAY! I want to see that on Mentalist !
And their hypnotic dance, their freaking interactions ! Ah ... It feels good.
I felt worried too at the end. But it was exactly how it should have been; him ended up realizing that she had hypnotized him unconsciously/he had hypnotized himself !
Ahah ... Not so easily to hide one-s feelings when you are so close so to the object of desire, huh Jane ? :-D

TWINNIE LOVED IT ! You have to keep writing ... There is a certain feeling to your story, they are realistic, they don't go "too far" in the fiction ... It could really happen ! And it's innocent, yet passionate ! Exactly how I pixture Jisbon.

thanx again... Franspeare of modernt times hehe

xoxo

Loved this one.

Aww, it’s mine, alle mine! Okay, it’s not but I’m a little proud that you could turn my promt into such a lovely piecde of art-. with just the right touch of melancholy in it.
Frankie's Little Vegas sounds like just the place Jane would like and choose. It took me a moment to realize, after which “Frankie” it had been named, but when it finally sunk in..yeah, nice gimmick!
And what I liked most (apart from the kiss and the dialogues…the list could go on and on) was when they left and all the magic seemed to be gone:
“Several minutes later they left the bar, accompanied by the sound of Frank Sinatra's All The Way”
I’m not so familiar with his songs, so I had to check them. And guess what I found: a very promising (and really, really suitable) bridge: “Who knows where the road will lead us/Only a fool would say/But if you'll let me love you /It's for sure I'm gonna love you all the way all the way”
The kisses and then THE kiss. Do I really need to say more about that?
There were many dialogues that could have been stolen from the show (I’m having high hopes for season six-which is at least partly your fault) but those are my favorites:
"It's all about pretending and believing, Lisbon."
"And of course, just as the queen of the night deserves it, you're dancing with the most charming and handsome gentleman in the room."
And Lisbon..it was so typical how she snorted and that remark. And that moment, later at her door, where they balanced on the knife’s edge for a moment (“If she asked him to stay then he wouldn't have a choice but to spend the rest of the night with her.”) …you really had me hold my breath there for a moment.
But it was so Lisbon to offer and explanation there.
Both of them where just like on the show and van Pelt too, being annoyed and amused by his behavior at the same time.
To sum it up: It was a pleasure, we should play secret santa again

TrustFalls

PS: Maybe its not mine, but I’m going to keep it anyway!
PS 2: Think about a sequel, will you? Please?