Reviews for This Love That We've Been Workin' On
MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
I don't know how I felt about this, but admit the concept was different and executed with surprising tenderness.
Fan chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Great job ;P

And I agree: better than E.L. James ;)

Write more
Beethoven Not Mozart chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Seriously, some people just need to write erotic novels for a living and be better than E.L James...

This had everything to it; the awkwardness, the uncomfortable sex scenes, but oh my god, it's so well written and descriptive, I'm pretty sure it gave me an asthma attack some where...

Love it. Do something more, please. Pleeeeeeeease. I will love you forever and give you a cookie.
Confused chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
That was uncomfortable, but well written.