| Reviews for A New Bella |
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jackyfloresq2001 chapter 18 . 3/10 can't wait for the next chapter in this story |
Guest chapter 18 . 4/29/2019 Highly recommend skipping this story. This story had potential but maybe you have ADHD or something. This story jumps around too damn much. It’s slow as hell and rushed at the same time. Not sure how you accomplished that. None of your characters are consistent in how they act. Glad you didn’t finish it. |
Bram Watley chapter 18 . 1/30/2019 Please continue. This is priceless lol |
Packer82 chapter 18 . 5/30/2018 More more please update again soon |
Guest chapter 18 . 4/3/2018 I love twilight and I like to see people still write fanfiction about and I love your story so please keep updating your a amazing writer |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/2/2018 This story kind of makes no sense? Alice and rose both said Edward was dead to them yet...they help him? I think this story needs some cleaning up maybe so it flows better. Maybe a beta will help. |
Doritos79 chapter 18 . 4/2/2018 welcome back and back soon evil bella 3 |
cjj220898 chapter 1 . 4/1/2018 This story is rediculous, it has very little structure and the story line is so all over the place and unrealistic... it was so hard to read but that’s for sharing anyway x |
samraven chapter 18 . 4/1/2018 having the flashback as one big paragraph made it hard to read |
Guest chapter 17 . 11/13/2017 Please continue please |
RexCaldoran chapter 1 . 10/6/2017 ok normaly I'm not so fond of the Twilight-Storys be it the original or the fanfics but after recommended by a friend of mine i decided to give yours a shot and I must admit it's way better than expected. only downpoint imo is that your "evil"-Bella so fast disappeared ;p |
Guest chapter 17 . 9/23/2017 Please continue please please continue please |
merniizztat chapter 17 . 5/19/2017 I like...continúe please |
Wolf2468 chapter 17 . 4/23/2017 Please continue please please |
lawless23 chapter 9 . 4/4/2017 Absolutely loved chapter 9 all about The Real Jane Volturi. The spanking scene cracked me up. Poor Alex. I love your sense of humor and the darkness. |