Reviews for A New Bella
jackyfloresq2001 chapter 18 . 3/10
can't wait for the next chapter in this story
Guest chapter 18 . 4/29/2019
Highly recommend skipping this story.

This story had potential but maybe you have ADHD or something. This story jumps around too damn much. It’s slow as hell and rushed at the same time. Not sure how you accomplished that. None of your characters are consistent in how they act. Glad you didn’t finish it.
Bram Watley chapter 18 . 1/30/2019
Please continue. This is priceless lol
Packer82 chapter 18 . 5/30/2018
More more please update again soon
Guest chapter 18 . 4/3/2018
I love twilight and I like to see people still write fanfiction about and I love your story so please keep updating your a amazing writer
Guest chapter 7 . 4/2/2018
This story kind of makes no sense? Alice and rose both said Edward was dead to them yet...they help him? I think this story needs some cleaning up maybe so it flows better. Maybe a beta will help.
Doritos79 chapter 18 . 4/2/2018
welcome back and back soon evil bella 3
cjj220898 chapter 1 . 4/1/2018
This story is rediculous, it has very little structure and the story line is so all over the place and unrealistic... it was so hard to read but that’s for sharing anyway x
samraven chapter 18 . 4/1/2018
having the flashback as one big paragraph made it hard to read
Guest chapter 17 . 11/13/2017
Please continue please
RexCaldoran chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
ok normaly I'm not so fond of the Twilight-Storys be it the original or the fanfics
but after recommended by a friend of mine i decided to give yours a shot and I must admit it's way better than expected. only downpoint imo is that your "evil"-Bella so fast disappeared ;p
Guest chapter 17 . 9/23/2017
Please continue please please continue please
merniizztat chapter 17 . 5/19/2017
I like...continúe please
Wolf2468 chapter 17 . 4/23/2017
Please continue please please
lawless23 chapter 9 . 4/4/2017
Absolutely loved chapter 9 all about The Real Jane Volturi. The spanking scene cracked me up. Poor Alex. I love your sense of humor and the darkness.
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