That is really good, generally wasn't expecting the humour.
Pls update.

Please update. this story is sooooo goooood. Its really suspeneful. Please update!

OwO What's this? A good story! You could do better with the grammar (I have nothing to do if you want me to correct it ;P) but the story is pretty good. But I really would like it if Miku and Luka would STOP BEING SO IGNORANT ABOUT THEIR LOVE ARRRRRRGGGHHHH! C'mon, breathe, Kona, breathe... Okay, I'm back. Well, just post an update when you feel like it, okie?

I just have to say that seeing there was a new chapter out made my day! Thank you! As always, your writing is a pleasure to read and the story has clear direction. Keep up the great work and I hope you get better soon!

Well i just happened to stumble across this story and i thank my lucky stars for that because this story is freaking amazing, like really really amazing. Sure it has some real sad stuff and i want to murder gumi the moment she showed up
Hope you recovery goes well and keep up the great work. See you next chapter :)

I hope your recovery goes well and get better soon.

It’s been nice seeing you update again, and of course seeing RWBY stuff pop up has been brilliant though admittedly I haven’t read them. But it’s great to see you back.

I loved the chapter, especially the start with everything happening between Miku and Luka and stuff, always enjoy that kind of thing because it’s rather funny.

Anyway can’t wait for the next chapter.

The moment you find contradictory. In the first chapter, you put "just after some weeks miu's family came and picked her up as well", but in this chapter you wrote "it took about half a year for her own family to come get her". Not here to harshly criticize, just pointing it out. I love this story and it kills me that there are no updates.

*sobs internally* man there's a lot of crying huh? This story is AMAZING and I've read it quite a few times hoping for an update. QQ plz update soon. Why you leave me on this

I tried to wait for chapter 10. I mean, I just finished chapter 9 today... Anyways, I wanted to write you a little review to encourage more of the great work! This isn't a real review (I'll do that once this is all finished!), but I hope it will help bring back your muse.
First of all, this story has a killer start! When I read, I'm in for the long-haul and that first chapter was exactly the length it needed to be. I actually started this while looking for some light reading, but man, your writing sucked me in. The characters are incredibly human and relatable while each chapter provides enough plot 'progression' to keep me hooked (they almost had it in chapter 4 with Luka's slip up! aaagh!). I think you have the romance down cold! The slow but steady fanning of the flames between Luka and Miku is always on pace and when that reveal happens - oh, man!
Second, I think that using a word processor (just not Word 2016) will really help with the writing. Things like auto-capitalization will speed things up and the style check can help with awkward sentences or verbage. That said, I think that the dialogue/inner monologue is always on point and flows naturally, sounding just like real people talking/thinking (which I love).
Well, that's about it for now! I await your next chapter with as much patience as I can muster.

It's aliiiiiiiiiiiiiive! -shot-
Should've reviewed earlier, but life.
Anyways...lotsa tension. Don't like. Realization of feelings. Like a lot :3

Next please!

You posted another chapter! *cries* I miss your stories huhu... I am still glad though that you haven't given up on this one hahaha.

I am gonna wait for your chapters, wolf. And since you are one of the writers that I admire in this fandom, I'll really cherish it. Plus, I lovee~ your stories XD And yes, I've said that before but still!

Thank you for the Negitoro~~
Looking forward for the next ones!

YOU'RE BACK! OMG YOU'RE BACK. WELCOME BACK, I MISSED U AND UR FANTASTIC UPDATES. I'M SO HAPPY TO KNOW THAT U BACK OMG. THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK. NOW, UPDAAAATE

*cries happy tears* FINALLY! I THOUGHT I WOULD NEVER SEE ANY NEW CHAPS OF THIS AGAIN! COOKIES! HOPES OTHER STORIES WILL REVIVE SOON TOO! *squeeze Wolf 'til she's passed out*
P.s: wanna hit favorite again, it's useless too do so tho ;; -;;

Horray wolfie return. This is a good year indeed, after y8ay8a now you _ Nice update as usual, looking forward for more.