Poor Juvia! Lyon is such a sweetheart!

Pore Juvia :(

...You know. I don't really read the manga (long mangas tire me and my bandwidth out), but I do understand that you might want to keep the story not too far from what had happened in there and the timeline. But I'm just saying, this is really good and IMO deserves to be a multichapter. Although I'm a big Gruvia fan (that somehow really don't mind with Lyvia-I'll ship the three as a pair if needed lol), I must say your Lyon in here is amazing.. So understanding, just what's needed for Juvia to see Lyon and let go of Gray, or for Gray to realize what's wrong and get Juvia, or even better both ehehehe.

That was heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Nicely written, fast-paced. Great to sum it all up. Really sad, too. I was kinda wondering what happened after that when I read that chap.

Hello !
First : i'm sorry if this review has some mistakes, I'm a French 15 years-old girl '
Then...
I love the way you show Juvia'as feelings during this chapter. I confess I was hurt for Juvia when Gray says he will say not to the stuffs he doesn't like. It's really to cruel for her. How can he say that?! She's a lovely girl in love! And then, after Lyon's intervention, I'm wondering what will happen now. In the anime, Gray blushed after the restaurant with Lyon and Juvia, and now he reject her like that. Moreover, Lyon almost says he let Juvia to Gray! So, what's the problem?! What's his problem! '
Mashima just want us to become mad!
Anyway, I think Gray is too cruel in this chapter and I hope Juvia will be happy at the end. Meanwhile... Good luck, Juvia-chan! You're a strong woman ! -Not a man, Elfman...-
Cordially,
KuroganeNoFeari

PS : I hope you will continue this story... There's even a vote for that on a blog, you know... ' And... Sorry if it isn't a part of your future projects...

*cries for forever*

HEARTBREAK
TOO MUCH PAIN
YES JUVIA I AGREE LYON-SAMA WOULD HAVE BEEN A LOVELY OPTION TO FALL IN LOVE WITH
BUT LOOOOVVEE IS NEVER EASY
SHHH MY PRINCESS MAMA IS HERE
*I have typed myself hoarse*

Congratulations. This detailed analysis of what was going down in chapter 338 has successfully broken my psche.

i think i expected something like this. though in manga gray is just joking around because of her "version change". and it was so cute dat juvia didn't stop fangirling even after d hottest rejection ever :3 especially in 340 when she asks him to drop d bad mood and he gives his sexist smile and juvia is lyc "kyaaah! gray sama is so cool!" she is so cute!

If only it was Lyon /3 m heart goes out to Juvia especially after what gray told her. Thanks for this :)

YAY! That was very mean of Gray...I've been dying to read someone's response to that moment! I knew it was inspiring!) Thank you so much)

Wow. I love the angst in this:) it's just so raw. We just have to think positive and never give up on this ship because many other Gruvia shippers have a feeling that Mashima will make character developments to Juvia about her fangirl-ism and at Gray will just slowly fall bit by bit, not instantly, so that it would not come out as forced or half-baked or something. Anyway, I like your fic. Good job on this:)

D: Im so sad! T_T