Reviews for Deja V |
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Guest chapter 5 . 4/17 Boston is in the red dust zone. |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/17 All that time and effort wasted,we had driven them all the way from haeare to johnesburg and the lizards came back. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/17 Their ships aren't as immense as you think, they're susceptible to multiple nuclear strikes and you have several hundred of their fighters , right?one or two comes under attack and the rest will withdraw but you cannot let them get inside your atmosphere or game over. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/16 The Russians have SS20 warhead don't they?remove the warheads,arm them and place them on the fighters and shuttles you you get up there kick them out the mother ships aren't going to want to enter a minefield... |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16 Jets are worse than useless against their strikers,they left fighters behind when they fled use them!don't tell me your pilots didn't fly in them they're easy to fly in air and space... |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16 Johannesburg,we can see it,we can see it!a year of battle,thousands dead,the apartaid army falling back to it's final defenses and then... |
Can't make a name chapter 12 . 1/16/2017 Like the way the chapter ends, "No worries there...Dad." Oh and the way it starts; Stuart (strapping blond Visitor male - is there any other kind?) |
Can't make a name chapter 11 . 1/16/2017 Looking forward to how "Daddy" fits into the story |
MissMelysse chapter 12 . 11/5/2016 Oh. Good chapter. I like Angie's moment of nostalgia for Castle Island. That really grounded this chapter in truth, as did Tyler's invitation to the shower. Amour Enterprises made me laugh. And Charlie... can't wait to see what happens there. |
MissMelysse chapter 11 . 6/22/2016 Love this so much. Can't wait to see how dear old Dad works out. |
Can't make a name chapter 10 . 5/18/2016 Ham and Angie are so well written. Their love and happiness is there as well as the playfulness Good job |
Can't make a name chapter 8 . 5/18/2016 I did not know that new chapters had been added, but now I am following you I got a notification. Interesting startup for the story Angie sure has gotten feisty :) |
MissMelysse chapter 10 . 5/18/2016 EONS between chapters and you leave us with that kind of cliff-hanger?! You are a cruel, cruel woman, Javanyet. Brilliant. But cruel. :) Seriously, seeing this update in my inbox was a lovely surprise, and I really enjoyed it. I love the way Ham/Angie has matured into such a deep relationship, and I love the way you keep them absolutely true to themselves, even as they're subtly changing. Great work, as ever. |
MissMelysse chapter 9 . 3/10/2016 Drunk Tyler is interesting, but the way you write the connection between these two is perfection. PER-FEC-TION. |
MissMelysse chapter 8 . 3/8/2016 OMG, she wrote something! Seriously, it's nice to revisit this story & these characters and see where there, uh, Destiny takes them. (Sorry. Had to.) The line about Chris helping Tyler process? Perfect. |