I totally didn't see this one coming never thought those two could be a couple but this works so well . You are a very talented writer .

Thanks man. You don't how much I love imagining these two together. I really wish their was a lot more yuri in Manyuu Hikenchou, then it would of been perfect. Only thing to add would be to describe them making love and I would die. Lol

Well, I literally just found this. I know, that's just sad, it was written last year. But still, oh my goodness, this is perfect. This story is so beautifully written, and I like how it isn't too raunchy. Just naughty enough. The characters' emotions are so clear. Great job!

Wow, that was sexy and sweet at the same time. I totally ship these two and this was a wonderful story your writing reminds me of my own writing style XD so, thank you for writing this! I really enjoyed this

Well well well isn't this a rare treat?

Manyū Hiken-chō is difficult to nail down as a series, an odd mix of historical setting, hyper-sexualized subject matter and an excessively outlandish plot, and you have the anime and manga in a nutshell.

And this story in my humble opinion is from that same tree that bore the original nutty shell that the original was in.

All of my kudos my friend, you have earned high marks from me yet again. 9/10.

And for the record, the only reason I am docking you one point is for the crime of not completing the love scene once you start, but I admit that that is a fairly minor nitpick all things concerned.

Keep up the good work Grim! :-3

Well, well, soldier...

HOO-RRAH! 1st Review EVAR, Btches!

Now, THIS...was...awwwwwsome! (Wavy Line)

So, we have the Manyuu step-sisters on a little soon-to-be lover's retreat, and it. Was. SOOOOO good! :D

I highly enjoyed the dialogue. It felt really natural. :3 And of course, Kagefusa's not-so-sisterly love for Chifusa was really sweet and the tension rose perfectly, especially with Chifusa's affectionate words and Kagefusa's moment of tenderness with that hug in the hot springs. *W*

And of course! The moment when Kagefusa can't take it anymore...and her love is welcomed with open arms and a loving heart. *O* Dat lemon was just beautiful. X3

Outstanding work, my friend! Bravo! (Salutes)

Semper-Fi! Carry on!