ahh where is the 3rd chappi T_T
i want to know what is gonna happen update please

oh my this is so bad
they will be back together right i can't see them like this
loved it

OH, THIS IS JUST SO MUCH BETTER THAN THE LAST ONE. NOT WRITING-QUALITY OR ANYTHING, BUT JUST, IT'S SO MUCH HAPPIER. THE MOOD IS LIGHTER. DESPITE THE TENSION, THERE'S HUMOUR, AND THE ANGER SEEMS TO HAVE TONED DOWN. IT'S GREAAT.

And I was dying throughout the ice cream part. Dying. It was hilarious.

But I'll say that my fav part was the end. Just the general Ryoma coming in and sleeping with him. The whole conversation. Tense yet humorous at the same time. It was perfect, and lovely, and ugh...I've ran out of words to describe your writing, okay? A girl can only think of so many substitutes for amazing. And awestriking. And wonderful.

I mean, cover hogger. Ugh. Ryoma. Love you.

"Sharing is caring." Ryoma, my baby, I love you.

I'm probably giving too much love to Ryoma and not enough to Kevin, but let me be guilty of that. Actually, I don't feel guilty. Ugh, Ryoma, lovely. And Kevin too. Yeah, definitely wasn't only your fault.

"For kindergartener's. Which fits, I guess." - OOOOOH. KEVIN'S GETTING BOLD HERE.

That was really great. xD Please update soon.

Your Ryoma is perfect. BUT YOUR KEVIN IS HOLY CRABCAKES AWESOME. The anime references are bonus points.

Like, how do I even review this? I'm on a fricking airplane right now. Seriously, how.

AFXCVBJHIJUOY*EWS$RXCVGHYTRDSXFCGAHHHHHHHHGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHKEVINYO USWEETIEYOURSOUGH

I just wanna gush about your Kevin please. PLEASE?

HE WAS SO FUCKING POLITE ABOUT EVERYTHINGGGGGGG

AND THE AVENGERS AND CIEL/ALOIS OH GOD. LOVE YOU.

This is perfect. Kay, bye.

(I'M SORRY THIS TOOK SO LONG.)

Wow, you're updatin' away!
Good for all of us :D

Loved all the references.

I probably sound pathetic AUGHGHING over your works of art, but I can't help myself. The whole thing's just so beautiful and breaking heart-ish, and I don't even like KevRyo much but THIS WAS GORGEOUS. Like, the whole thing...like neither of them are really BAD or anything...like you're not mad at one over the other because they're both kind of just...you just feel sad.

The part where Ryoma doesn't drink that 'stuff' anymore...ugh...Ponta...HOW? RYoma...*cries*...

I'm really excited for the second part. The fluffy part, you know? Because things need to get better. Pleaseee.

Great job, as usual.

I...
Well okay everythin I had to say just flew out of the window and IT'S RAINING HERE HOW PRETTY and Iloveyou and IloveKevinalittlealot and gorgeous Ryoma bringing up all the angst in the world, fucking someone right next to Kevin no i can't even think
you can pm me (like, whenever you want to rant or stuff), i get them in my email inbox even if i can't login and reply, just know I'm thinking of you (tell ciel i think of her too, and meadow) and yes yes *nodnod* i've gone a little bit crazy because your writing tore some of my heart out and I have Sweater Weather on repeat because Remember The Taste and ugh i...

Can't wait, although i have no other option to.
Have a littlebig hug. Um yes and a ton of well-deserved praise for your sheer talent.

What? A LITTLE angst? What are you talking about, that was fucking truckloads! Okay, maybe it's just me because Kevin AUGH, Ryoma AUGH, they're my babies but still.

*isgoingtogushaboutkevinnowkay* Auuuuuugghhhhhhh Kevinnnnnnn you poor baby ugh TT the fact that this is told from Kevin's point of view is ripping my heart out ugh

*nowisgoingtotalkaboutstuff*

PONTA!? you took away the PONTA?! No way, this is too much *dies* *comesbacktolife*

WHOA WHAT THE HELL RYOMA I KNOW HE'S YOUR EX AND SHIT BUT NOT. COOL. It does seem like a really Ryoma thing to do...but even when the person you're in the same room with is not your EX BOYFRIEND that is NOT FUCKING COOL. It's just in my personal rules of piss me off. I mean if someone started having sex while I was still in the room, especially if it's MY room, I'd walk over and interrupt them just to hit someone. Geezus christ, you just don't do that type of shit.

Ugh, that last part...so I'm a bit confused on whether they know that Ryoma and Kevin were together and broke up or if they know they were together and didn't know they broke up or if they think they're still friends with major ust. So...will we get to know about whatever's going on with Fuji and Atobe next chapter?

THAT. ENDING. *dies*

Sad how he liked Ryoma but then he left anyway out of fear : Like they say,"If you see a robber, give him your money first before he could take it." Or do people even say that... Feel the burn element of surprise robber dude! I'm really excited for the next chappie :D Can't believe Ryoma just kissed him and left... Well i guess i can sorta imagine him doing that . Time to end my rambling... Please update soon