Not a bad story so far, I like the premise of it. The only problem I have is does there have to be a rape scene in every chapter because I think it's taking away from the story a little bit, just my opinion.

I haven't read the first installment yet, and it confused me a little at first, but this chapter is really good. It's terrible for our dear Ms. Potts, but it is really disturbing which makes the story different and awesome (Did I manage to say it without making me sound like a creep? oh well...)

So there will be another story of the series coming right? Looking forward for it!

now I'll go on read the first story...

Oh My Gosh! Pretty Please continue this! It's amazingly awesome!

I'm sorry, but that's just ridiculous. Stane could NOT have survived what happened at the end of the first movie. He was strapped into the Iron Monger suit, electrocuted, and then fell into the arc reactor which BLEW UP and took out everything inside that building. There is just NO WAY that any ordinary human being could have survived. Stane is extra-crispy barbecue, the end. If you want your readers to believe that it was possible for him to survive, you need to give us a more detailed and logical explanation than "I was in a coma."

This story would've worked a lot better if you'd made it a post-Iron Man 3 sequel with Killian, whose Extremis powers could have allowed him to survive the end of that movie, and I think it would've been a much better post-IM3 story than your "From the Ashes".

Whoo! I was really excited seeing the new story notification in my email!
Btw, I'm actually a bit hesitant to have PM conversation cuz I really don't want to bother you with all my long and silly blabber lol.

Aaand this story. this story! Wow, you're really wasn't kidding about torturing characters! Twice and she completely forgot both!
I like the voicemail addition, btw.

So there'll be Avengers and IM3 addition right? And now I wonder if Pepper and Tony will ever know about this lol..

Love it anyway!

So glad you wrote a sequel. Man, Obadiah skeeves me out so much! Is there going to be another one? I think it'd obviously be harder once Tony and Pepper are in a relationship. Ugh and someone really needs to kick Obadiah's ass for all the shit he's pulled.