Please update this story soon please.

This guy is already dead and passaway

pls more update

Cont. (I accidentally pressed the Post Review button).

That is OOC, since I believe he would do whatever it takes to take back Shirou rather than just sacrifice him, even if it kills him (look at the Lyrical Days reboot).

I think you should add some extra lines where he chastises himself for returning to that line of thinking, as the 'Hero of Justice' is no more, and that he should believe more on his adopted son.

This is fun to read, especially since I loved the Lyrical Days thread, and i would love this to continue.

The only problem I have is Kiri's post-recovery personality. Specifically the "sacrifice Shirou" part. Remember that in UBW, he sees Shirou as his form of redemption for his actions as the Magus Killer. Plus he basically became HF!Shirou after being crippled, only using magecraft for his loved ones (Shirou and Illya) and never picked up his mantle again.

So him choosing to sacrifice Shirou for the world would be him discarding his atonement.

I disagree on Nanoha being more powerful than the servants, and characters from Nasuverse.

I’m sorry to hear that
I hope she got better

Anyway loved the story
I have some hope of it continuing someday

You do know that without shirou or arturia the sheath is a paper weight

Somebody should adopt this story

Haaa...

I curse myself for not reading this earlier, when you were updating it. When it was first released. I even blame myself for reading this fic, knowing that was uncomplete, and now I try to stop my thirst for more.

The time has passed from the last time you published. The time is still running, and now five years had passed from the last update.

Since you haven't updated from the last note, I can only suppose the worst had happened. Something happened to your aunt. If that happened. I'm sorry. Is the only thing I can even say.

If your aunt is (or rather, was) fine, then that's a relief.

I won't say something so egotistical like "Please update soon!" or something like that when we both know (and I guess that everyone that once followed this fic know) that you won't update this nor now nor never, beause this fic is not on a hiatus. This fic is abandoned, and will forever remain as an uncomplete and unsatisfactory cliffhanger, a reminder of what could have been one of the best crossover fics of the Nasuverse. But now is only a grave, a cold and harsh reminder of something that had been exciting and interesting, buy now is only one of the many, almost limitless stories in this site who would remain always, until the end of the times, unfinished.

I won't even say something so arrogant as "Can I adopt this story?" because I know I won't write something half as good as what you've writted here. I9 f I try to write a sequel to this, it will noly be a waste of time for both, me, the writter, and anyone who read the pattethic attempt of making a sequel to a great fic.
Hell, I don't even know if you can enter to your account, or if you are still alive. I don't know a lot of things, and I can't say even less.

But I can say this.
What a waste.

What a waste of time. what a waste of potential. What a waste of feelings. What a waste of emotions. What a waste of stories. What a waste of ideas. What a waste of recourses. What a waste of everything related to this fic.

It was a good fic.
At least... The short time it longed.

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I apologize for my bad grammar and every issue with my english. I'm still trying to improve my english, but reading it is countless times more easier than writing it or pronuntiating it. My native language is spanish, and I'm still learning english.
Anyway, this is not a flame. This is... what you can call a goodbye to a great fic.

it's kinda obvious (to me at least, and even then I might be wrong) that the Kiritsugu harem universe is the magical girl Ilia universe.
that'll give Nanoha and Fate a newfound appreciation for their Devices.

though I'm sad to say I missed the Fate Proto reference in Gilgamesh's symbol until Shirou used Bab'ilu. Especially since I consider Proto to be my favorite Fate storyline. or mostly that I like the Proto Gilgamesh and Cu'Culainn better than their Stay Night counterparts. Arthur is pretty badass too but he's not on an I like him better than Arturia scale.

This is just really awesome and I can't wait for more

I hope things have gotten better on your end, I would like to see the story continued

Still weak...

I know this story is old and a review now won't change anything but having shirou do nothing for 3 chapters was probably the most infuriating thing I've ever read...