I loved this story so so much! Thank you for sharing such a great read! I laughed so many times!

Ewwwww Edward stop touching the skank... and at least bleach your mouth and fingers afterwards...

Ok I gotta stop. You should have had this in Bella's pov. Too have this in Edward's POV and have him VIVIDLY hear then YET he couldn't get to them is absolutely unbelievable and CHEAPLY done.

It's like in action movies when a bad guy walks straight up to the protag to shoot to shoot them but get disarmed. MAKES NO SENSE, you have a gun.

The correlation here is, YOU expect me and other readers to believe that he could vividly hear what was going on but he couldn't find them on the path? That's asinine.

Jacob always has to be a jerk. Well at least we know Bella has a sister rather than her own baby. Still doesn't explain why she would keep her a secret or why Jacob can't keep his hands to hims elf. Friends or not there are limits.

Well, a child too! Why would she never mention having a child? Edward was certainly a dick, but there's a lot she's kept quiet sbout. He told her he had trust issues yet he saw what he saw and now a child she never even hinted about. He's not the only one with trust issues.

He shouldn't have left, but she obviously hasn't told him a lot. He hasn't been up to her place but sees her coming down with a man she obviously knows very well. Touchy feely. Can't totally blame him, she's been very careful with timing.

Lol. I googled flowers that mean horny. All I got was a horny goat weed . Oh well, enjoying the story.

I'm really sad to see this end. Such a sweet family. But I'm definitely going to check out the rest of your stories!

Hahahahaha...Vicky just kills me!

I had a feeling about Caius and Seth! Poor Anthony...stupid fucking Kate.

Awww...so sweet

What a sweet gift. Definitely a talented kid!

Another intense chapter. Kate is just the worst! Those last thoughts of Edwards are so true...she robbed so many people with her callous selfishness.

Wow. That was an intense chapter! Fuck, every time I think Kate can't be any more horrible of a person she somehow is!

I still think her going into his office and kissing him while he was asleep is rather creepy.