| Reviews for Sword Art Online: Unity |
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Snowrider56 chapter 1 . 12/16/2018 cool story can't wait for the next chapter |
LonelyCyberNinja231 chapter 1 . 5/7/2017 my man. finish the cpmoc plz its really good to be a one chapter fanfic |
metalican overlord slayer chapter 1 . 4/3/2016 i like the story you should totally create the next chapter! |
Mike Kromer chapter 1 . 9/19/2015 Must have more asap lol Love it so far. Keep it up. Gotta love the twins lol |
tf330129 chapter 1 . 7/4/2015 keep it up :) |
Iotal chapter 1 . 6/20/2015 Will this fanfiction continue? It's been nearly two years now, so I'd like to know. The Skyrim magic skills though... |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2014 sooo many abridged references. |
Devil Rebel chapter 1 . 3/27/2014 Not a bad start. Looking forward to more |
NitroADHDguy chapter 1 . 12/17/2013 Hey, make me a summoneble creatchure! How awsome wouls that be. Just think abbout having the abillity to summon what ever the F u want. But now that i think abbout it, pokemon is not good together with SAO. But u could make me a cind of dragon or somthing epic. Do NOT summon me at abbout seven o clock, u do not want to se me in the shover. The hot water does somthing to a certain genetle, and its a huge ass mother F'er. Anyway, i love the storry so mutch i cried when i ran out after 30 min. Waiting all day long for update. Cauce it's worth like 2/3 of your life becaouse then at a age of 60 u can sit back and think of when u did not play with eweryone else while reading this and say: Man i realy spent my life good. |
zeganon chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 ah, that was simply amazing i would love to read more of this story |
covain chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 Umm if your still working on this might I suggest adding another oc if it is ok with you plus like the story as it stands now was just wondering about if you could put my oc in it cause I don't have time to write a fanfic right now so that's all |
darkerdeepdown chapter 1 . 8/8/2013 I had to stop at the m-rated question but yall watched the abridged didn't yall. Twas epic indeed |
Aeonir chapter 1 . 7/25/2013 Well written, good characters with natural interactions and just over all well paced. Still though I really don't dig the whole bow and magic thing that for some reason everyone insists on including in every SAO fic... Guess I'll have to wait to the next one to see how how you handle it. You at least can write properly and your characters aren't some clueless asexual 5 year olds like in 97% of the rest of the fics that can be found. |
Chooch77 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013 great story, are they going to find Kirito in the next chapter? Because i always hated the way that he left after the end of the boss battle... |
StarBorn Michael chapter 1 . 7/20/2013 Type your review here... |