Reviews for Sword Art Online: Unity
Snowrider56 chapter 1 . 12/16/2018
cool story can't wait for the next chapter
LonelyCyberNinja231 chapter 1 . 5/7/2017
my man. finish the cpmoc plz
its really good to be a one chapter fanfic
metalican overlord slayer chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
i like the story you should totally create the next chapter!
Mike Kromer chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
Must have more asap lol

Love it so far. Keep it up. Gotta love the twins lol
tf330129 chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
keep it up :)
Iotal chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
Will this fanfiction continue? It's been nearly two years now, so I'd like to know.

The Skyrim magic skills though...
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
sooo many abridged references.
Devil Rebel chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Not a bad start. Looking forward to more
NitroADHDguy chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Hey, make me a summoneble creatchure! How awsome wouls that be. Just think abbout having the abillity to summon what ever the F u want. But now that i think abbout it, pokemon is not good together with SAO. But u could make me a cind of dragon or somthing epic. Do NOT summon me at abbout seven o clock, u do not want to se me in the shover. The hot water does somthing to a certain genetle, and its a huge ass mother F'er. Anyway, i love the storry so mutch i cried when i ran out after 30 min. Waiting all day long for update. Cauce it's worth like 2/3 of your life becaouse then at a age of 60 u can sit back and think of when u did not play with eweryone else while reading this and say: Man i realy spent my life good.
zeganon chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
ah, that was simply amazing i would love to read more of this story
covain chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Umm if your still working on this might I suggest adding another oc if it is ok with you plus like the story as it stands now was just wondering about if you could put my oc in it cause I don't have time to write a fanfic right now so that's all
darkerdeepdown chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I had to stop at the m-rated question but yall watched the abridged didn't yall. Twas epic indeed
Aeonir chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Well written, good characters with natural interactions and just over all well paced. Still though I really don't dig the whole bow and magic thing that for some reason everyone insists on including in every SAO fic... Guess I'll have to wait to the next one to see how how you handle it. You at least can write properly and your characters aren't some clueless asexual 5 year olds like in 97% of the rest of the fics that can be found.
Chooch77 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
great story, are they going to find Kirito in the next chapter? Because i always hated the way that he left after the end of the boss battle...
StarBorn Michael chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
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