OK IM UTTERLY INVESTED IN THIS FIC!

I like it

I must say that this fanfiction is beautifully written. So many times people forget to make their writing interesting and simply go for a nice story. I like it when someone like you puts time and effort into making it sound that little but more intelligable. I know you probably won't update soon but what I've read so far had satisfied me far more than a 100'000 word story with a good plot.

Very interesting story so far. I'm interested to learn more about the past. Keep writing!

So from the flashback(gonna be sad ones isn't there?) Danny is 20 now? 21?

You can do it Fenton! I mean, Batman an J'onn have it like-half ready with their votes! Now they just need their own.

Oh a couple typos I think? Used there instead of their I think. Sorry. 'XP

(...that the first Robin?)

Oh boy, what'd ya do Fenton? (there should really be a better care and monitoring system for young celebrities...)

Batman, Superman, and...Doctor Who?(for the reincarnation)
I suppose I'm with the League on this. Well see how this goes.(I wish I was good at speeches... :p)

What's going on? :0 (and Danny just started the tale huh?)

Well written and natural so far by the way, flowing and such. Will have to see how this developes.

Luv the story update soon

Wow

Okay, I am really liking how this is going so far.

another well-written chapter.

Will Danny be alright?

Wow well-thought-out can't even begin to describe just how brilliant this is since 1) not everyone would use PP and 2) It's so. damn. POETIC I'm curious to know a little about how Danny got into that situation ( poor boy seems just so broken ) and how he'll fair with the league ( or maybe it's the other way around ;) ) I just love the originality though and hope that you continue XD

I want to say that you need to put all that is said in a different caption. I personally put the inside "" to make it easy for people to follow. I honestly though Danny was rambling inside his mind. also, I don't see why you keep refering to a"Phantom Planet" incident. Relly I sid it once before, and I will say it again THAT WAS THE NAME OF THE MOVIE! not a "RL" Incident... unless you named the event in which Danny attacks the league like that, which would made it just plain confusing.

Note that I complain only because you write marvelous neat block, chapter, and then you put in something so... well, WRONG, in my book. If I am to keep reading it, I shall keep complaining on it until you fix it... Having said that. Nice chapter :)

well-written chapter