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then Eden began to feel a weird call from Chronos's blood then herself was dressed inthe 1979 made for TV Movie the Martian Chronocles the m usic played a sad tune herself began to chan t wearing crafted Vulcan ceremonial jewelry Sarek these two old ancient Martians I Wear these robes look at the Ocampan ears teenaged pointed on es her hair fallen to her hips eyes of Midnight bue looked like her Sybok behave try this a more scifi book yes Eden Spock she gran ted me book she looks like a Priestess I Have a oUCHLESS WILL Cure easy then then a Ring to knock m y brother's feet off thank you it attached with the other on who is that be let get itT'Pau that ring is an cient yes it's old we are goiung to Mt. Seleya dead animals you will honor m y goddess Arkaaana then She suddenly drank Urus's b lood entered a weird trance then uh oh Negavibes herself sense danger I Go a omen it not us or them Herself had a vision Eeden yes what you gained a prphetic vision it's not from here Harken ye thy warning and listen a dream of Romulans of 2387 with a very old m an lost Romulus a star will callide destroying twin worlds in the future will; extinct Vulcan gasp then herself felt very strange then her voice expoding words she was wearing a c rown headress caused Sonvok she has a vision she is with a m an her c hosen one her religious nam e is T'Lar What?! madam a ouchless band aid herself felt it from Ursus my mother loved Syboj my brother ejoyed Sammy her brother Hold on then he was trained here it's for father than k It's diabetes checked he said Father young man me you are using from her garden first listen wisely a dash of this a dip of this he's sick that's not good nes then he had a friend of his then to creater a drug he was a Healer Eden is dressed that is some robe Martian where are they now Extinct herself was highly superior then news of our trip to Raal where the Spiers lived were wealthiest rich most powerful family her father was diabbetic he was very thin had a diet Animal blood with n on-Sugeary foods suablite to his disease whatt this my twin yes they weere taken had kids ew sis she gave me Maori wiggle on the nose it's from here yes she is with a child in time her fionger healed quickly kept it on overnight looked better Father taught Eden to c ook very fiery then meet Tigger one servant sneezed was deathly allergic from Cats Now Read on felines try this Vulcan meat he squealed he was adopted lets see female cats enter heat season to m ate with a Ton bless you four is less how old holy Cronus three weeks oh you poor little baby you are hisowner yes her fac e wen t red how embarassing a smoke was fereed oh!Oyrelax girl then that Abb y was tal was stron g a sushi chef was born down boy then finally what this Japanese then Father tased it's well foreign yes Aunt whhy we are here weeat at home herself ate good foods who is this meet my mate Luke ulp meet Sarek yes sir he wasvery young so his mate short as Mother we match heighs her hair is in balls parented bangs oh my he ate then he's sleeping finally reached their mansion met her father Spock yes sir he was resting try this drug then he did it healed him hi girls her best friend in a bathing suit looked beautfui oh no gracious Sis news of them were teenagers you are marked Werewolf fasion red it on wolf mationg to produce more muscular but powerful wolves gasp High Mster she is human for one night a priestess of Arkaana is joined or intiated yes that herself had propehtic dreams like a Vampire slayer priestess.

Please, fix your spelling mistakes. The story is good, but the content is being taken away from by all of the spelling errors.

Update immediately, please!

You are very welcome,
Another excellent chapter (as per usual)
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Cute story

BRILLIANT UTTERLY BRILLIANT. I CANT WAIT FOR MORE PEOPLE TO READ THIS. Keep uo the good work Dongy. I am glad you showed me this book 8 cant wait to read more and I hope it continues the way it is

I only just found this story but i absolutely adore it.
I very rarely review anything and very rarely enjoy every chapter, but I love this.
It's very well written except for some odd, but forgivable, misused words, also Spock is probably the hardest Star Trek character to write but I think you do it in a very appealing way.
Looking forward to the next chapter
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Dear Dongy,
I love this book with all my heart. Its adorable. It makes my heart flutter and makes me nervous to the stlmach in the good way. It makes me want to be there an watch the scenes unfold (i will be invisible) and maybe help out their relationship

Nice story

Beautiful. There is a few thing here tht I didnt know about Vulcans. Its all new. Great chapter. A few mistakes but i excuse you cause you, well you write in the early hours kf the morning

Keep it up. Uou are a great writer and i hope we can work on another book together soon :)

It's good, update soon!

Dear Sister, This book is great. I believe that it has potential. But. The thing you do need most at the moment is A Beta Reader, who can go over and check the writing, help fix mistakes and stuff like that. Now I am glad i finally got around to reading this. It is a great book. If Fanfiction could get published I believe this one would.

Mehmeh what to say? I love it, beautiful :D

FYI -Spock would not be able to eat cereal with milk ...milk is an animal product and all Vulcans are strict vegan's other than that great chapter.

So awesome. Beautiful. Just wow.