Hello,

This is beautiful. I love Usagi's voice, the way you write it. Thank you for sharing this with the internet, it's so lovely! 3 :)

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Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. I love the repeated lines in all the right places, meaning something a little different each time. You really excel at that.

This was freakin' amazing; your style is gorgeous and the slow way everything breaks and rebuilds is so, so great. Your attention to detail and the way you build settings makes this fic feel so rich and complete. It's so clear that they mean so much to each other but it's never overstated or melodramatic, and I love how there's space to interpret it as romantic love or familial love or friendship love because to me that just shows just how big their love for each other is - because it's all of it, one way or another. I love Leo breaking things down into lessons like everything is so tidy and orderly and then breaking /that/ down; I love Usagi going back and forth between his dimension and theirs and never really being quite where he wants to be until he's reunited with Leo; I love how they're both so competent without being flawless. Just a fantastic fic. 3

Wow, that is all i can say right now. Just wow. This story is amazing, and i love the feeling it gives off, just wow again haha

This is a fantastic story. It's so well-written; I was hooked from the very beginning. It didn't have much dialogue and usually, that would cause me to lose interest fairly quickly. But this. It was written so beautifully that it didn't matter. The imagery was clear, the flow was smooth, and the overall expression and concept was just so heartwarming. It left a very deep impact; I'm sure I'll have to read this again to understand everything fully. There were little subtleties there that I appreciated (and I'm sure I didn't get them all) and it would be a delight to find new ones when I re-read this.

It was very touching and such a unique way to tell your story-written like a professional. I'm a sucker for things that end in a full circle too, so that's a bonus. You kept up the suspense throughout the fic without fail and at the end, I was literally just screaming in the inside with anticipation of Leo and USagi's reunion. You pulled it off perfectly and so very much in character.

Fantastic work!

I love how real this story feels, like I could take a step forward and wind up in the same world as Usagi. Very cool. You can tell that he's older than the turtles, like an older brother to them. Are you going to do any follow up stories? I'd love to see what happens next, like if he decides to make the turtles universe a more permanent residence or if any of his adopted family get drawn into his dimension for an adventure or two... Hopeful grin.

Excellent story. Wonderfully written. Please write more!

This story is wonderful written and displays Usagi in a marvelous way. It hooked me up the moment I read the first sentences and didn't let me go till I was through.
I really love how it displays Usagi and his relationship to the turtles and Splinter.

So very, very well written. Why has nobody reviewed this? It's amazing!