Reviews for Breathe
Bree chapter 1 . 4/28
This is absolutely incredible. Your writing is so genuinely amazing and the way you managed to capture their characters beautifully. I love this so much, and I just wanna say thank you for sharing your talents!
TheEliteLabRatsLover chapter 1 . 3/8
Ive had to read this multiple times, just because it's so awesome. Thank you for making this. You've got some serious talent.
laily.spenstar chapter 1 . 10/24/2019
I love when Merlin got sick. Why no chapter 2?
bluedragon03 chapter 1 . 9/22/2019
I love this so much! I love stories where we get to see arthur realizing how tough merlin is and being in awe of it. And especially ones that highlight how important to arthur merlin is, and that also include the love of my life, Gwaine. I feel like the cannon narrative neglected merlin and Gwaine's friendship a bit but it always cheers me up when fanfics make sure to include him! I didn't think it was too long at all by the way, if that means anything from me who is coming to the game several years late. XD who would believe that I've been watching merlin ever since the pilot episode aired and only recently started reading fics for it.
a person 56 chapter 1 . 6/18/2019
this is AMAZING I love it just so good
NaLuFireSpirit chapter 1 . 5/5/2019
Wow I love the story I was just thinking Merlin was going to die at first but then you made Arthur wake and get all protective and it was great!
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
nicely done. Poor Merlin he always finds trouble even when he should be perfectly safe. I loved Arthur's reaction, and I hope that guy never gets out of the dungeons.
Noxvae chapter 1 . 1/8/2019
Just great !
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2018
I loved the story! Arthur's reaction was perfect, I Espically loved how he made sure Merlin was taken care of.
writeallnight chapter 1 . 9/2/2018
Well this was a delight! I'm fairly new to Merlin and I've been looking for wonderful things to read; this definitely makes the list! Injured Arthur, injured Merlin, so, so good! I especially loved the look into what Arthur was feeling and thinking. He's such a complex character and I appreciated how you portrayed him here!
Skywolf42 chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
I enjoyed this, thank you. :)
It's very well written.

If I may give you some constructive feedback:
The word is spelled 'nauseous.' Also, 'nauseous' is how you describe something that is sickening, as in, it makes people feel sick. If you say a character/person is nauseous, it means they make other people feel sick. If you want to say a person feels sick, that person is nauseated, not nauseous.
gaylelbf chapter 1 . 7/3/2018
Well written story!
EmotionalDreamer101 chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
Aww, That was really amazing! Poor Merlin! I love this, That was great! Arthur’s anger and high concern for Merlin was awesome! I love when Arthur is protective and caring for him! :’D That was really sweet and heartwarming, I loved how all of the knights eventually also stayed with Merlin and Arthur to help his recovery! This was fantasticly written, I was fully invested in this! Such a great read! :D That was really powerful and strong with Merlin’s emotions and Arthur’s gentleness and comforting nature towards him! That was really beautiful! :’)
XYZArtemis chapter 1 . 12/22/2017
Poor Merlin!
IWouldGetUpButNah chapter 1 . 11/1/2017
Beautiful, wondrous, gorgeous, marvelous, amazing, exciting, heart wrenching, soft, cute, wonderful, couldn't be better, love love love
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