I'm noticing a pattern of everyone blaming Yavi for everything, each conflict being blamed on her . I have to say, that is most unfair and incorrect. Its like no one but Yavi feels any responsibility for their arguments and such. They have really unattractive holier than thou attitudes.

Not bad keep it up

Hey, I'm excited that you're revising and making new content! I definitely want to check out Morning Star of Rivendell on AO3, but what's your username on it so I can find your stories?

So long as you don’t abandon the story, take as much time off from it as you want. I’ll keep it on my Followed stories and wait until Judgement Day for it to be updated.

Stay safe and healthy! I hope everything works out for you.

an interesting story.

loved it! more please?!

Honestly you don't need to make this word for word from the movies, and by this I mean you don't need to include things like Bilbo's voice over, it take you right out of the story, kills the immersion in this being a real world reading it like that. If you really want to include it have it just be in Frodo's head and have him think of it, right now it's reading more like a screenplay/script than a story.

Love the story

I was so pleased to see you'd updated! It was so sweet to read the 'new love' between them and I was honestly so pleased that Yavien has found a kind of peace- a kind of home with him that she didn't seem to have at Rivendell. What does her name mean again? I really liked your inclusion of the detail with the black swans- it really captured the Tolkien-esque idea that beauty and evil can sometimes be related which was an inference I really enjoyed. Thank you for updating!

I think she should be captured with Merry and Pippin. It would give Legolas extra motivation to hunt for them, and Aragorn would search for his “little sister”. Gimli would be guilt ridden that he was ever so harsh to her (I think he might privately find it hard to forgive himself for his initial treatment of her). Though she could maybe run into Boromir when he’s crying with remorse over trying to take the Ring, she could comfort him so their last meeting is on good terms. Not sure if she should go into Fangorn with Merry and Pippin or be noticed by one of the Riders of Rohan and rescued by them.

Love this! Hope you continue it!

Hey! You should keep updating! Its been a long time since you have last updated and it is getting to a good part on the story line! Her hand legolas are courting boromir is about to get hurt, Sam and frodo are about to separate from the group. Why did you stop!

Awww this story is cute, i cant wait to see the upcoming battles

Loving this story so far, can't wait for more