Reviews for Freefalling
nuri-chanka chapter 13 . 7/23
Thank you for not abandoning this story! I've recently started reading Bella/Paul fics but so many good stories never got finished and it's really frustrating. I really like your characterization of Paul and his slow but meaningful progress with Bella. I also appreciate that you didn't turn Jacob into a jealous jerk or a heartbroken guy, this always makes me feel a bit guilty for wanting B&P to be happy. Waiting for an update!
middshel chapter 13 . 7/17
So nice to see an update for this story. I love this Paul, and this interpretation of the imprint. Very realistic in my opinion.
Ashatan87 chapter 13 . 7/16
I missed this story! I just re-read the entire thing so I didn't forget any of the details! I can hardly wait to read the bmnext chapter!

P.S. Finally! A kiss and more kisses in the same day! Lol but of course Charlie would just happen to return from Seattle lol. Good thing for Paul Charlie didn't see his hand under Bella's shirt, even if it was just on her lower back.
midnight shadow of darkness chapter 13 . 7/14
I absolutely love this! It's amazing and can't help but happy scream for Paul and Bella. I look forward to continue reading what you have in store!
Guest chapter 13 . 6/19
Binged this, they’re so cute
Kmpcarter chapter 13 . 6/12
Please tell me there is more?
Alyscia chapter 13 . 6/9
Love where this is going hope you keep your muse!
Trc8420 chapter 13 . 6/3
Great story! Can't wait for an update
B4bidden chapter 13 . 6/2
Thx for updating and I liked seeing this side of Paul
MrsSomerhalder849 chapter 13 . 5/26
Loving the story and the long chapters, and the pairing!

Please continue the story, I can't wait to read some more!
Debbie Hicks chapter 13 . 5/26
14. Fourteen
then ALIEN RATTLESNAKES Bitten her hardest then to him then to others three as al of them Dried out the blood had Turned themselves into warriors as all of the best friends she bitten him hardest then to the others and best friends and to both each both then Aliens/Vulcans then Kids/toddlers drained then to her/the best friends With they the n six found her with immortal children kidnapped her/hi/they experimented then herself was marked head-cord Ripped erased memories augmented by brain surgeries tied up tortured forced to breed but herself Quoted words no man ever have me Tore death came for her/him/they the tore head-cord then Where you think you are leaving newborns health problems had started sliced good with them fled in time was Immortal by now from home the deported both from NASA Bodysuit as all of the clothes with both with they as all of it very far as all of the was Anmesiac then was on the run then then both found her six see broke the law Cracked then then tore it then then with theirs Brought there good they are Dead from here as all of blood loss tried to stop it blew up who done to her/him/they Volturi then in time Herself alone and unwanted had a mated was completely marked then nuked freely had Blood bonded sliced freely each as all remains into the each four then Nuked freely both brought there good they are deceased with as all of them her father is old by now it happened Each both then Atomiized then with they with each both more Volturi guards then nuked freely as all of them it was too late As all of them it happened while training to heal with swords clashing then was really fiery but fearless like her her own hair was long with bangs in a Vulcan clip in her healing his was well robes from Red Sonja from the actress once wore it now fit her style and status now looked like her while the actress in her 20's it really happened something was on her mind found him really handsome but sexy about his looks strong and muscular then herself felt from the mark he noticed how beautiful she became then it happened from Eros's Twin arrows then suddenly just fully-time finally fully officially firmer Kissed to cure their own pain became intimate were now imazdi suddenly grew something deeply was romantic love then Too late needed privacy who were more than intimate the track Wifeing placed during moment of love oh she has good taste in him the ending credits helped them then Video of her and him were falling madly very more romantically in love with each other so they oh no not them courtship too late Crunched in Gol near Mount Seleya news onto them then then too late the doctors discovered them healed Oh my head watch it Cullen you claimed her yes it's Earth the very more of them deported you are now Mated for life oh crap Bells is my what mate Excuse me in time the very as all of them lost families friends and loved ones tribes herself vowed in her brand-new warrior's clothes knelt to her plunged her sword looked Fierce but fiery made a religious vow by oaths O' Odin allfather I Seek Counsel grant me the Faster reflexes of Xena I Swear it by the many gods and goddesses under thy sword bless me with the strength of Sif goddess of growth Frigga goddess of foresight heed thine prayers make me strong again under thy blade I Hold I Seek vengeance and justice I Vow to thee under your Dear husband lost a eye millennia ages past grant me Revenge it said you wanted you have it Bellona it is Granted! Suddenly granted her a battle uniform with him/they it really happen a voice sounded Norse within her head touched her head granted her a hilt a glowing sword it really happened a glowing light into herself a truest alien vengeful power of Fury of the gods/goddesses then it finally just filled her heart then blessed her was possessed so they a more very fiercer cold but icy calmer vengeful strange fiery look by causing her to look from the age of Conan he noticed how icy she became fiery fearless but cold and calmer but really fiercer Paul oh my god you look beautiful really herself was with him pardon they are courting it's our ritual oh yuk it's called Dating In the age of Conan Bree Wifeing yikes in time too late what she needs training with this then suddenly herself letting loose a Xena Warrior princess's War dirge far mostly trilling more heavenly and much angelic ringing with the fiery alien Trilling of war into her blood forged in a heat of battle a mighty princess was reincarnated oh crap hey boys YO! her crap KER-CRASHING! Ooops I Am a Amazonian warrior groan where she did that bo staff these clothes to wear she must be fit in the gym oh god Women oh no not him again can't it women you ok guys moan sorry to bust your bubbles I Struck you down harder yikes.
futurecullen26 chapter 13 . 5/23
Gah they're so cute. Hope quarantine is treating you okay and you get a chance to update soon! I love this Paul and Bella so much
futurecullen26 chapter 12 . 5/23
Oop Charlie.
Also I gotta say I really appreciate how easily you made Paul be like "yes romantically, that's the whole point" because so many fics kinda skirt over that part of imprinting that says it's intended to be romantic first and foremost if possible lol. Which is fine in those other fics of course but I like seeing it easily happen for once!
Kedrane chapter 13 . 5/19
Great story !
indraaas chapter 13 . 5/16
Big facts this is the first fic I've managed to find where Paul is in character and like...so is everybody else. Like this is actually so believable I'm dead? Top tier OP, I stan this.
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