This bull shit romance crap... luffy is pathetic.

Canon luffy was better... so disappointing.

Ugh. Luffy hasn't gotten stronger nor better.

U kept him stagnant and developed the others. But mostly only robin and chopper. Zoro is especially just shit.

Hey I know it’s been 4 years but you need to come back and finish this it’s by far one of the better fan fics I’ve read and I hope to see it finished one day.

Im crying because of a ship ...

again!

Been 4 years guys :( he ain’t gonna update as much as I loved the story. Hope you doin well mr writer

Everyone likeing the story man update

I like how you had Robin go with Luffy through the Amazon lily arc through the impel down arc and marineford arc.

You know I really want to know more background on Luffy and Robin’s child.

I picture luffy as guruguru in his white form, with some type of symbol on his head.

Haki huh? I am curious to know if it's the White Devil form that enables Haki-like ability or if he is unlocking it gradually... I must say that Robin having a kid part was beyond a surprise, didn't expect that... I am not one to have kind thoughts of raping, so I didn't like it how you incerted it, I have no problem Robin having a kid but on how it happened, even if she wasn't raped and just scientifically impregnated, it's still a great violation of her body

Early observation Haki huh?

I kinda and at the same time didn't expect Luffy to fight Zoro like that

I didn't expect the reactions from Zoro's katanas, it was interesting

You really take this fanfic on a lot darker path

I am starting like his White Devil form more and more, I hope he unlocks its full powers before the fight with Crocodile