Holy crap this was a dark-as-hell story... But I liked it.

I'm glad I found this fic all those years ago.
Okay, fine, it was only two, but it sounded dramatic, and I could resist saying it!

Anyways, this was a good wrap up. In retrospect, I wonder how Sora is able to make five friends with no qualifications managers. But I guess it's a little late to be questioning reality now.

As to the actual chapters, I liked how most of them were resolved. The way you described the difference between the sex Kairi had with Sora and her prior sex was a nice balance of figurative and literal language. It wasn't overly sentimental, but it carried sufficient weight for the moment.

I would have enjoyed seeing a little more detail into the drug addict side of the story. I liked the "darkness" that Xion's arc brought to the story, so I would never say no to a little more. I actually had either missed or forgotten the fact that Xion was on drugs. so when she passed out, it was a surprise.

But thanks for writing this story. And I hope you do well in college! And if you want to keep in touch and just hit me up for a random chat, I'm always game.

Keep it up!

Liked how it this story has ended and to be honest, I haven't been on this site in months. I've moved on from fanfiction and it seems you are too. Life has been kicking my ass and it's a battle I have to win. Needs 100% of my focus. So I guess this is a send off for you and me. And like your portrayal of these characters, shit is not over yet. Have a long way to go, hurdles must be jumped and brick walls needs to be crashed into head forced. So I liked the open ended story. Perfect metaphor with how your life is heading. Been a blast!

Could you please update soon, i realy want to know what happens.

I liked this chapter a lot. I think I prefer reading Xion's story the most out of all. She's strong and capable, but at the same time she isn't. This describes a lot of the characters, but you see the contradictory strength and fragility most easily in Xion. You've described the world she lives in pretty well, and I'm interested to see where you go from here. It really sucks that she misunderstood like that, but with her personality in mind it's pretty easy to imagine.

It's good to see Roxas actually having fun for once.

Keep it up!

You know, lol! You really good at sucking me in to a character's pov and then ending it when i'am hooked. And start all over again in the same damn chapter. But damn the feels was all over this one. Figured Sora would respond the way he did. Shocked that namine trolled Axel, surprised that Roxas had Disney movies and heartbroken reading Xion's backstory. It just seems to me that everybody is at fault here. Waiting for the moment when all of them are face to face and explained how this shit happen.

To me, it seems like Sora was the glue. Once he left, everything went to shit. Can't blame him from trying to better himself. Why Xion just left like that if Riku was her best friend? I can understand Kairi situation in why she went down that route. Still inexcusable on all counts. How can a group so close ended up like this? I'am sure you'll get to it soon and i'am waiting for that day. But for know, Sora has taken his spot as the glue again and is hitting the reset button on all their lives. Excellent chapter as always. Lol. You had me feeling every emotion but anger in this chapter.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can. I am enjoying this story.

Ah dammit! Xion is running away again! wtf? Seems like Xion and Kairi why be the hardest to convert. Well, Kairi hit rock bottom and is trying to climb out. Xion says fuck that. Lol! Poor Riku. Traveling the world to find her, was oh so close and she gone again. But hey! Roxas is on the road of recovery! With Namine there to help, he should be alright. But now, he has to clean up that glass out on that grass. Lol! Which is hard as hell to do. Lol!

I liked the process of healing Roxas is going through just by being around Namine. It's nice to see that he's listening to his conscience because of Namine.
Apart from that, everything was fine. I was really hoping Riku would meet Xion, but I guess it's not going to be that easy.

Keep it up!

Agh, I kept on meaning to review this, but I just put it off and procrastinated. So here's my review.

You did pretty well setting up Xion's cynicism with Terra and Aqua's little drama. I'm looking forward to how she breaks her out of her shell.

Sora's explanation on why he left Kairi was fine. It's nice how it wasn't this romantic or sudden revelation, it was just a sort of fading and avoiding. It's pretty realistic.

There's not too much I can say to criticize. I'll try to find something next time. Keep it up!

This is a good chapter please update soon.:)

Welp, Terra done fuck up. Lol! What did he expect Aqua to do? Sit around waiting for him while time goes by? That's not how life goes buddy. U mad bro? But really, Terra is being selfish. Like those kids in target crying for a toy and that toy is sold out. I do understand were he's coming from, but he can't really expect Terra to sit around. Like a toy. I find it funny that Xion thinks all that was funny though. Lol! Not knowing her own love problems is just around the block soon.

The sora part was very well done. And I felt fearful with Sora. That's how good that was. That whole exchange. Hmm. So that's why Sora didn't call or leave a text. Yeah that was pretty stupid thinking there. But then the others didn't even try to contact him. What if they change numbers? And the others could of just went to Sora parents and got his new number if he change it. Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter. This story is excellent.

This is the best story I have found on this website, all the other ones have barely any thought or detail In them. Keep writing!

Love the new update. I had been wondering about Kairi and Sora's background and it's good to finally see it. Keep up the good work, cant wait for the next update.

Oooo. Turnaround for Kairi there. Anyway, it's been a really awesome chapter, and I hope Riku meets Xion soon. Lovely backstory you've crafted for her.