This is the best thing ever, any chance of more?

Nice

hahahaha, Well now we know we're Ed gets all his Self-loathing from

Nice! Good characterization, and funny too.

Haha I always knew that no matter how ed hated his father he really is just a child wanting his father love :D

Great story! The fkow if the story is pretty much like the canon would have been. And hoenheim, damn I love his character soo much...

Hey why don't you continue this xD make a sequel about al as well! May when the time Hoenheim reveale his secrects

This was really interesting. I love how you characterize Edward toward his father, and Hohenheim being something beyond the bastard he is in his first appearance. *snicker* I really hope you continue this, because I want to see where it goes, but frankly as it is now it's enough that I'm probably going to want to reread it. *grin*

This was really cute! Not cute but a beautiful family bond!

yyyyeeeeeeeesssssssssss
so much amusement
so much satisfyment
so much awesoment

Keep it Going!

This was something special :)

That was brilliant. I also really like brohood hoho, and was really dissapointed that there wasnt more of him in the series. Both characters were awesomely accurate, the OC was hilarious, and I loved that you took the time to describe scenes whenever it was needed.

I may just go and check out your harry potter crossover fics.

I love this so much, and everyone's completely in character! There aren't enough Brotherhood Hohenheim fics out there.