You have talent, I say. Not very polished yet, but potentialy. Wish you the best on the road to become a fine writer!

Now, on to the story. You have good gasp on your character. The pace is kind of fast, which leave less room for character development.

...Okay, I wasn't expecting that. The typos are mostly gone too, so keep it up!

This is a really intriguing story, I look forward to seeing where this leads!

This is really amazing!
Please tell me you are going to continue i really want to know what happens next

Whoa. This interesting... I can't wait for what's next!

Excellus is still an man-woman thing and just a jerk in general. I wonder who else is going to make an appearance in this fic, hopefully someone that is not Excellus. I hated his guts the first time I saw him in FE, but then again, who hasn't? I felt Io sort of came and gone. There was one grammar error that I found in my sleepy state and that was in the second to last sentence but overall good chapter.

Another chapter, awesome! Everything in the chapter is good and all but when Leon looked at Robin's hand in their first meeting, wouldn't Leon see the Mark of Grima on Robin's hand and would of reacted to it? Is it not there? It was just kind of bugging me cause you would think someone that is a Grimleal priest would have a reaction to someone having the Mark of Grima on their hand. I might of missed something and I would feel dumb if I did but I just wanted to point it out.

This was a nice heartfelt good-bye, it tugged at my heartstrings a little. I like the little reference to Robin being the Fell Dragon too, Rowan doesn't even know. I look forward to the next chapter.

Ah, nothing like a BlackCavern fic to make my day a little brighter :D As usual, I very much enjoyed this, brother. The 'regal' bearing of Robin's mother and how she's liked by so many people is an interesting touch, not one I've seen often. Great work!

I'm liking it so far, hope you continue it.

I agree with ya, Robin's mother should be a strong and kind person. I can't really think his mother as a lady gaga or diva or...anything, really, well hope to see your next chap, I guest?

This is an interesting story. I like what you've done so far, and I hope you'll continue it with at least a couple more chapters.

Interesting story! I hope you continue this! Also check out my stories: The Return of A Champion and The Grand Exalt's Wedding

Hopefully this ends up better than most contrived backstories. Good luck and keep it up!