Oh my fucking god. You are beautiful. This is fantastic. Just... agh.

PLEASE TEACH ME HOW TO WRITE LIKE YOU OH MY GOD. Um yeah I absolutely loved how this story began and the whole thing was just hot as hell.

I really adore this, how you've made Sam's horny-ness get him into trouble. I was holding my breath, just waiting for the moment where he gets walked in on. Mmm. That was all kinds of awesome. Actually, for a moment there I thought Dean had BROUGHT SOMEONE BACK WITH HIM, oh god. How much more embarrassed would poor Sammy be? I'm very glad it was just Dean, obviously. ;)

This line. Oh man, this is the best thing ever. It's a ridiculous thought to have, but one I think many would share if they were in this situation, myself included: Sam, while he's remembering to breathe, thinks rather hysterically that at least Dean can't see the fucking toy.

My only complaint (besides it needing to be longer, of course) is that I wish there had been a bit more dialogue, but that's probably just personal preference. You did an awesome job setting the scene and showing the sexy images, but for me reading the conversations between the brothers before/during/after sexual stuff is my favorite part.

*reams your ass through the internet*

Kidding. But seriously! Please please please write that sequel, ok? I need me some more hot brother-loving.

Yummy! Delicious! SQUEE!

*foams at the mouth*