Holy Shit i love this so much

I love this! So cure to read him falling in love:D i wanted more now haha

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. SO MUCH LOVE IS FELT FROM THIS STORY!

GOOD JOB AUTHOR! I love the character development, the thought and the details that was written for every single scene. Every itty gritty detail was filled with purpose and I love every single one of it!

This was such a fantastic read, I know it’s going to be one of the stories I’ll stash away to read over, over, and over again.

Fun one shot. I like that u divided it into unique chapters.

I realy liked, very good

Woah! Your writing is really really good for somebody who learned English as a secondary language. Well that is it's not your first language. Rather Impressive I must say. You should write some real books, I'm sure you would become very popular. I loved this story very much :) You did an awesome job!

Truly breathtaking. Really. Not too long, or cheesy or even rushed. Everything just seemed to flow naturally, like this was how Sasuke and Sakura's relationship was supposed to bloom. You're talented, so be more confident in your works. ;) This was a supremely satisfying story with plenty of fascinating details and character developments. Amazing job!

I really love your fic .. Hope they end up together in the manga..:(

This is so cute and perfect that I almost died!

Aw! That was sure something. I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!

So cute! D

One of the best one-shot's I've read ever!
And the lack of dialogue molds the story perfectly!
Loved it! (:

You write really well. REALLY WELL. This story is everything I could ask for: sweet, cheesy and SasuSaku. I like that stuff... xD
It's not crappy AT ALL. This is better than most of the fanfiction I read. Even from the people, whose first language IS English.
I know how one can get unsure about this stuff; my first language isn't English, either. You're not alone ;)
Really nice work. Keep it up! (o)

Ñahahahaha. Love it. Deeply. Like really, really deeply. So beautiful it hurts.
I think it was long, but hey, that just makes it all the better.
Too cheesy? Nah, I think... fluff. FLUFF. FLUFF EVERYWHERE.
Btw, I liked how you kept in character the adorbz Sasucakes. XD
So english isn't your first languager. Big deal. Don't belittle you. You're great. You're an awesome writer. I think you are completely fluent because I didn't notice.
I really, really liked the chapter. So, here's the deal.
Do you think it is possible for me to translate this?
PUH-LEEEEASE. *puppy eyes no jutsu!*
Haha. My deadliest technique. If melts all hearts. Even the most, cold and frigid ones! I know you'll succumb to it, too! MUAHAHAHAA. (;
Nah, with all the fuss aside, I really hope you say yes. (:
In any case, I hope to see more of your work soon! (;
See you! :D

I thought this was perfect.

Love the character development and the growing feeling Sasuke began to feel for Sakura. I would love for Kishi to give us something like this.

Great job!