Some nice fluff there. I see a few plot holes but nevertheless it was fun to read.

If Spock went through kohlinar and could therefore feel nothing, what enabled his emotions to spring back to life? I don't get it.

Oh my god. You made me smile so much it's completely illogical how you've managed to do so. I can't believe you finished this story so completely and fullheartedly, I felt the pull throughout the whole story and while as I almost died, you've made me so happy.

Thank you so much for writing this, I loved it. I really did. Brilliant job! x3

That is poesibly one of the best spirks I have ever read. I'm not ashamed to say I laughed and almost cried and screamed throughout the whole thing. I'm sure my rabbit thinks I'm crazy:-) u are very gifted with words and this story made this agreat fourth of july

Oi, feliz porque encontrei sua história muito linda adorei ler, parabéns.

Wow, this was just intense, in a very sweet manner. :)
Love it.

A VERY NICE STORY OF J/K...LOVED DA ENDING..THOUGH WUD HV LIKED IF JIM WUD;VE GIVEN BIRTH HIMSELF..ANYTHING IS POSSIBLE IN A FANFIC... HOPE U WRITE MORE FLUFFY STORIES OF J/K...

PERFECT! LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!

*starts laughing hard* Oh man, you got me there! XD You really scared me for a second! Loving this!

Omigod you are so DEAD. I HATE YOU.

That...that...BASTARD! Go to hell, asshole! Prejudiced, over-bearing...GAH!

Yea. So. That made me cry. Well played.
Can't wait to read more.

This was sweet and lovely!

This story started out kickass, and then gradually became more rushed and it felt choppy, almost. A lot of things didn't make much sense. Like, Spock bought an apartment in a nice area in San Francisco in just a few hours after docking. And even though the apartment was just bought, Jim knew that there were strawberries and chocolate in the kitchen. After that everything just became very rushed. But overall, the plot was great, and the first half of the story was written exellently.

I really liked this fiction, thank you for writing it and finishing it. Just one question, what made you name it Icarus? I hope that you can reply to this as I don't quite get it. Great story, though!