| Reviews for The Dark Whirlpool of Konoha |
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Guest chapter 16 . 6/10 Y’all down playin my dawg Jiraiya like day...woooooow |
Some dude chapter 7 . 2/22 I'm pretty sure at this point in the timeline Naruto has taken a chidori to the chest I don't think Kakashi would be that insensitive to flare that jutsu just a a demo right in front of one of the people who've been on the receiving end of it |
Kingkong101 chapter 4 . 11/20/2019 This is just shit |
Brandon Boodoo chapter 12 . 9/13/2019 THE MINUTE NARUTO ACCEPTED DANZO YOUR STORY COMES TO AN END bye bye retard. |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/26/2019 your naruto is a fucking retard. He already fucking KNOWS how to tree and water walk, there aren't 'different ways to do it'. Once you learn the basics you just PRACTICE it until it becomes second nature, unconscious, so he can do either without needing to even think on it. The clones discussing bit works fine for NEW things, new exercises. But he's known tree walking since Wave, Water since before the chunin exam finals. So yes, 100 fucking clones doing those WOULD actually help him. And fighting his clones with lethal jutsu so he gets to learn what they know? They're HIS fucking clones. Disperse them, learn, move on. He won't advance himself if he's dead or stuck in the hospital again. |
christopherrhaydon chapter 17 . 2/7/2019 Update ASAP awesome work |
Kingkong101 chapter 16 . 4/26/2018 No |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/5/2018 Why would Tsunade tell naruto to stay back instead of Kakashi to tell him that the Kumo ambassador could be used to start a war. Tell a Genin or a Jounin. Hard choice right. Makes no sense and almost made me stop reading |
DarkDragoG chapter 3 . 8/3/2017 I love how you pointed out the flaw in the shows version of shadow clone training |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/18/2017 Naruto wears a mask? I think you've convinced the series with a different one. The series with a protagonist having a mask is called "The Mask". Ssssssmokin... |
Guest chapter 17 . 3/30/2017 Plz write more |
arinasution5 chapter 17 . 12/23/2016 Go |
urbansquidly chapter 17 . 7/28/2016 Please update this naruto fanfic. It's one of my favorites. I've read it multiple times already waiting for an update. Pls |
Amazing Grace chapter 11 . 7/5/2016 It's not Jinchuurikin it's actually Jinchūriki thought you should know. |
Guest chapter 11 . 4/3/2016 Are you gay for dunzo you piece of shit. |