Reviews for The Dark Whirlpool of Konoha
Guest chapter 16 . 6/10
Y’all down playin my dawg Jiraiya like day...woooooow
Some dude chapter 7 . 2/22
I'm pretty sure at this point in the timeline Naruto has taken a chidori to the chest I don't think Kakashi would be that insensitive to flare that jutsu just a a demo right in front of one of the people who've been on the receiving end of it
Kingkong101 chapter 4 . 11/20/2019
This is just shit
Brandon Boodoo chapter 12 . 9/13/2019
THE MINUTE NARUTO ACCEPTED DANZO YOUR STORY COMES TO AN END bye bye retard.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/26/2019
your naruto is a fucking retard. He already fucking KNOWS how to tree and water walk, there aren't 'different ways to do it'. Once you learn the basics you just PRACTICE it until it becomes second nature, unconscious, so he can do either without needing to even think on it.

The clones discussing bit works fine for NEW things, new exercises. But he's known tree walking since Wave, Water since before the chunin exam finals. So yes, 100 fucking clones doing those WOULD actually help him.

And fighting his clones with lethal jutsu so he gets to learn what they know? They're HIS fucking clones. Disperse them, learn, move on. He won't advance himself if he's dead or stuck in the hospital again.
christopherrhaydon chapter 17 . 2/7/2019
Update ASAP awesome work
Kingkong101 chapter 16 . 4/26/2018
No
Guest chapter 5 . 3/5/2018
Why would Tsunade tell naruto to stay back instead of Kakashi to tell him that the Kumo ambassador could be used to start a war. Tell a Genin or a Jounin. Hard choice right. Makes no sense and almost made me stop reading
DarkDragoG chapter 3 . 8/3/2017
I love how you pointed out the flaw in the shows version of shadow clone training
Guest chapter 2 . 5/18/2017
Naruto wears a mask? I think you've convinced the series with a different one.

The series with a protagonist having a mask is called "The Mask".
Ssssssmokin...
Guest chapter 17 . 3/30/2017
Plz write more
arinasution5 chapter 17 . 12/23/2016
Go
urbansquidly chapter 17 . 7/28/2016
Please update this naruto fanfic. It's one of my favorites. I've read it multiple times already waiting for an update. Pls
Amazing Grace chapter 11 . 7/5/2016
It's not Jinchuurikin it's actually Jinchūriki thought you should know.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/3/2016
Are you gay for dunzo you piece of shit.
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