Owwww. I think ripping out my heart and stomping on it would have hurt less than this. But, gorgeous prose, and the Cockney was actually pretty good! I write a lot of Cockney characters myself, sooo. :) Again, amazing job with my favorite pair of kleptomaniacs!

Pls cont! But he should die and then she should go back to the junkyard and they will all be sorry for her and yeah and stuff happens. Deal with it.

This is absolutely beautiful, dear. It is perfect the way it is. As you said, every couple needs a good tragedy, and this is a great tragedy...don't change a thing. :)
It is always wonderful to find such well-written stories...especially the sad ones. Thank you!

I could understand every word that Mongojerrie and Rumpleteaser were saying, when they are in my story's I don't type the cockney because I can't type in it so I leave it up to the readers.
I like this tragically sad story I think it could become more than one chapter, but that's just what I think