You Could At Least Give An Ending Or Epilouge Like He Married Or Send To Other Dimension

I know this is work is kind of dated but it was still a tremendous read. I really like how you tied in Afrien's past with Freud's and explaining how the pact might have been formed. It was also a really interesting touch that Freud was not able to cast magic before forming the pact.

I only wish you brought up the love theme earlier which he ends off with, because I didn't get that so much from how you're written Freud. It's a very good reason to fight against the Black Mage, but based on his defining relationships with Afrien and Father Rene I'd think it would have more to do with family and companionship.

But anyway! All in all, this was a journey really suiting Freud. I loved reading this. :)

This is really good. Wow.

A few too many grammatical and syntactical errors and awkwardness-some of which signs of a writer who needs to draft more carefully and to get a bit more (and wider) reading under his belt.

Hi, it's me again!

I am utterly speechless by the time I hit the last chapter. To be able to characterise Freud and Afrien in four chapters is a remarkable feat. Chapter three was the one that tugged at my heartstrings, so much that I teared up a little... twice.
Chapter four... wow. Your writing managed to lead the readers to empathise with Freud and Afrien throughout their journey, to see them both come a long way and it provided so much weight to Freud's speech at the end of the chapter... well at least that's how I felt. oTL

This is a story very well written and a memorable one at that and once again, I look forward to more works from you.
-Noct

I expected much more reviews for this. I extremely loved how well planned it was. And the sequence of events were getting more and more interesting as they go on. No doubt touching to the point I almost wanted to tear up. I loved how Freud was written out in the first chapter because not a lot of people would imagine him portrayed like that in the past. But this certainly gives me an example of what the real image he was before becoming Dragon Master. I would just like to say, excellent work on the story. This certainly made my day better.

I love this fan fiction.:)

i feel bad for the monks for having to deal with freud...

I like the way you do Freud's thoughts and backstory. It's perfect. I really wish I could write like you but I have my own style already. XD

I really like how you made a backstory for Freud, how he becomes this frustrated, angry boy into a wise, knowledgeable mage.

What a great story! Although it is complete, I really want to know what happens next.
It's so touching!