Your writing is phenomenal. They really should have had something like this happened in the show.

That was great ,amazing , wonderful,spectacular

Cute

I loved every single bit of this!

Nicely done. I'm still irked that season 2 had almost no Charming family. Except for the first episode and the scene in the nursery, it was nothing more than an afterthought. So thanks for adding this much needed moment.

Wow! your writing is amazing, love this so much. Eddie and Adam read this please and get your writing into gear, we need this in the show. Actually YOU need to write for the show! Please continue with a follow up chapter with Emma's blanket. : )

Awesome story! I wish OUaT did something like this! Oh well, that is why I come to this website, to read excellent stories by writers like you!

love this! please write another (emma david maybe? or another emma/snow :D)

Liked it - "Broken" is one of my favorite episodes. Thanks for sharing.

I'm really glad you had Snow address this particular point. Emma was undoubtedly lashing out but since she is an adult, letting her know just how bad things were, that abandoning her was really the only choice, is necessary and right.

I loved this! I hope you plan to continue.

I love this! The way you write Emma/Snow is perfect. They're perfectly in character, and the story is beautiful. Thank you for writing and sharing.

really, really good