Been rereading this fic since it's been a while and it's still pretty funny. Not going to lie, I know Percy's line where he threatens to raze Olympus is very serious and everything but I can't get the image out my head of Percy acting like a parent/adult-in-charge to the Olympians on a road trip basically saying "No one is dying or getting killed or so help me I will turn this prophecy around!" XD

Hahahaha
Percy is scaring the gods
By existing

Again.

I like this chapter. More story parts instead of 4 words. It's a lot less stressful than trying to remember every little detail they are reacting to.

This is the original content I'm talking about.

The story isn't balanced. All the reactions are dialouge and it makes the story flat. There needs to be more like thoughts and original content. Like actually having those battles that you tease about, or some couples moments.

Constant bickering after each and every line is tiresome and it's hard to keep paying attention when nothing happens.

This was good i liked it. One thing though: Apollo wouldn't burn up from eating too much ambrosia. It's god food. Demigods might, because they're half human.

great first chapter, and an actual solid beginning. A lot of these stories don't have that and it's annoying, but this one seems good!

bruh i hate it when you do that stuid thing the dots thingy sucks

I'm sorry, but if Annabeth was five in the time the olympians were before this reading, then Jason was four since he's a year younger than Percy and Annabeth. Hera should've already known.

This was one of the best read the books I've ever seen

the spaces there, incomplete makes it boring to read

the spaces there, incomplete makes it boring to read

That was depressing and I already read the books dang dude but it was still great though

Argh shit, I really want to read it, but I can't... I read the first few Percy Jackson books when I was younger and my english wasn't as good yet, so I only have the german ones... Rip

This is nice that everyone experiences what they feel in the books. I can't wait for Artemis to feel the weight of the sky. It would have also been interesting if everyone felt what Percy felt in the books so that they could understand what he went through.