Perfect.

There's no other word to describe this.

Make this into a muti-chap story

this is probably one of those few stories where the sex scenes dont feel dirty but something beautiful and full of love
keep writing! Dont stop, ever

Nice story, very sexy!

please please please write more this was too amazing and perfect like wow please write more

CAN YOU PLEASE WRITE SOMETHING ABOUT THIS KCA pleaseeee
theere is a video of both talking and staring each other ... and ugh I need a fanfic

best story everr

amazingggggggggggggggggggggggg! you must be a writter seriously!

Oh my gosh wow i loved reading this and you are an amazing writer :) I loved how you put so much detail and though into Miley's thoughts but seriously can this happen in real life and yeah i loved reading this

Wow. This was brilliant. For a start, I would never have been able to tell that you'd never written a sex scene before. It was better than some of the embarrassingly bad sex scenes I've read in published novels. I'll be honest - a lot of time, when I'm reading stories like this that don't really contain all that much dialogue, I find myself skipping through a lot just to read the interactions between the characters. But with this, I literally couldn't skip through it. It was really well-written and I understood exactly how Miley was feeling, and to me, the good stories are the ones where the reader understands what is in the character's head perfectly. I adored this story. When Nick told Miley that he loved her and then she left, my heart broke for them. I was so emotionally invested in their relationship that by the time Miley finally broke off the engagement, I was screaming at her inside my head that she should have done it that first night she was with Nick. Anyway, the point of this long-winded review is that, whilst I don't really read many stories on here anymore and generally stick to writing now, this was probably one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time. You're a fantastic writer, and I really am excited to read more from you.

It's been a while since I've read a Niley one shot as incredible as this so thank you sooo much xxxxx

AMAAAAAZING! I really enjoyed reading this pls. make more

This made me cry. God I wish I could write as beautifully as you do. You are an incredible writer. This was full of so much emotion and I just… It's too beautiful for words.

Awesome story! I really did enjoy reading this it put a spark i've missed in Niley :)

Oh my god please more! Something! Anything! Holy shit that was amazing.