I don't ship elfman and lucy. Elfman and Evergreen I ship tho

This story is really good. I love your strong vocabulary words. The theme of this is really cool. Your story made me love fanfictions now. I hope you continue with this. I love your idea and theme here.

Is this a Nalu fanfic?

Great first chapter

loving it ..

Terrible story
Hate it
Bad pairings

Hate the pairings nalu for life
This sucks
Worst story ever

This is under nalu search, don’t approve of the pairs cause nalu for life. Not a hate comment but the pairings are terrible for me cause my OTP has been crushed.

Your story is amazing! Keep up the great work :D

I’m gonna be a little sad if these are the final pairings. I don’t like that Lisanna kinda came outta nowhere kinda seemed off putting for me, at least. I’ll support whatever ending is coming, look forward to the next update.

I'm in love with this story and all of the couples! Including LokexLucy and NatsuxLisanna. Keep up with the great work!

Girls are not prizes. Do you understand this simple fact. Lucy feels like inanimate object in this story. Going from one man to another with no agency. Romance needs depth. She will end up alone at this rate. Females don't need men to protect.

no wonder anime trolls lucy fans. If anyone thinks lucy has any iota of chance with gray, they have still to learn great deal about love. These kind of story bore me. Atleast lisanna is not villain.

I love this story so far. You should have a chapter about prom or homecoming. Keep up the good work.

Considering Lyon in manga and anime did not even know Gray had anything to do with Juvia, I am guessing his crush on her was real. Poor Gray almost lost her.