WHERE IS THE SEQUEL? ARE YOU STILL WORKING ON IT? I NEED TO SEE THE GRACE/JEFFERSON REUNION, AND WHERE ON EARTH IS AUGUST?

Snow had probably already hit menopause. Now she's got to go back to having periods again. Poor woman. Ah well, all magic comes with a price.

The only problem I see with the age gap is that she'll probably die long before he does, once they all start aging again. It certainly didn't affect him falling in love with her again. Unless people are already thinking that baby Neal isn't going to happen unless she de-ages somehow?

MY BRAVE BOY.

WELL IT'S ABOUT TIME! ELEVEN MONTHS?! THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU KEEP PUTTING THINGS OFF; THEY GET HARDER AND HARDER TO DO. I understood not telling little Emma; that was too big of a secret to expect a child to keep. But once she was in her teens? It would have planted the seed, even if she couldn't believe it yet. How did August learn about SB, though?

THANK GOD FOR JEFFERSON CALLING OUT SNOW FOR NEVER TELLING EMMA. THE MADMAN IS THE ONLY SANE ONE AROUND HERE.

SNOW KEEPS PASSING UP GOLDEN OPPORTUNITIES TO TELL EMMA! IT'S DRIVING ME CRAZY!

WHAT IS THE POINT OF MM BEING WITH EMMA IF SHE WON'T TRY TO CONVINCE HER OF HER HERITAGE? SHE'S NOT EVEN MAKING AN ATTEMPT! ALL IT'S DONE WAS GIVE HER A BETTER CHILDHOOD! Which isn't bad, obviously, but still NOT UTILISING THE FULL STORY POTENTIAL OF THE SET-UP.

*Blink blink* I never realised that we never were told Graham's real name. Well, that sucks. Oh well, Rumple never got a first name under the curse. I expect the Graham fandom has made up tons for fics.

What's going on with MM? Is the curse trying to work on her and make her forget who she is?

THIS WAS AWESOME. Henry telling MM about the curse and who she was and her saying 'I know, I never forgot' was SO GOOD, Henry getting that instant acknowledgement that he was right; I would have loved to see this version of events played out on screen. I'll look forward to the pair of them (and August!) team up to make Emma believe.

:)

I'd forgotten that August had written the book! Gosh, how did it end up in SB? Was it the Author who bought it? The Sorceror's Apprentice? That whole arc was a bit confusing. I really liked the exchange where Marco thanked MM for lending him her son, and she mentally thought 'no, thank you for lending me yours'. August has been such a great character in this, and he is as well in another fic that I'm reading, so much so that I can only think he wasn't utilised to his full potential on the show.

Must be Jefferson following Paige around, I hope MM can figure that out and meet him, and talk to him. At first I thought you were just going to skip David having been in a coma, as not really necessary, but inserting it in here as something that already happened, is even better. MM knows that her arriving woke him up, and he doesn't have 28 years of a shared life with Kathryn, that he doesn't even remember her. So you got the emotion of her first shock in and her relief and hope in now that she's realised that. Good stuff.

*Looks at August carefully* Is his leg turning to wood, somehow? Is that why he won't show his 'injury' to Snow?

TELL HER! TELL HER! TELL HER!