Sequel please

Lovely.

Sequel please this is a great story

I understand why you felt they couldn't really be together... but I also like that it is open ended the way it is so I can believe that Khan gets free somehow and they make it to that other planet.

sequel? pretty please?

It feels like their should be a sequel to this. I understand it was supposed to be an opened-ended ending, but it feels like it still should've been more. Like an extra scene showing Jane still working at starfeelt and somehow see khan frozen body and feeling like she should know him.

I really loved your story. Everything was unexpected and the last 2 chapter... heartbreaking. I wish there was a sequel because, honestly, that cannot be it

This is so tragic and yet beautifully written, my heart can't take it! I love how you kept Khan in character the entire time. I'm so depressed, I'm going to dig a hole and stay there :(

Hey,

oh, thats so saaad! *sniffs*
I like your Story! The stormy beginning, the fluffy middle and the saaad ending.
Great work!

Bye
L.

(sorry for my bad english, its not my first language)

Love this story. Enjoying it very much. I like the resistance. I like that she's like not just gonna give in immediately... Even if she is just making things worse for herself lol.

You mean mention Khan, I always see Ricardo Montalban...lol

I really enjoyed this story. I hope you make a sequel it's so good. There needs to be more star trek 2009 stories!

You know i love it when some asshole says something stupid and not at all true in Reviews because then author s like u write even better in the face of such animosity. It may hurt when u read retarded bigot coments but know you could write novels epic novels and they r just jealous asshats who want to bring u down a peg so fuck them this story is flipen awsome

Hey Jeralee,

so this is the first Star Trek fanfiction I ever read and I have to say: I love it. It was just amazing to read your version of Star Trek and Khan, I really could not stop reading and now I'm sad because I read it to the end (Which I think is a good ending). Khan was not OOC and did not turn into a love sick man. Nop, he was just like he should be, dark with his not so moral intentions. And Jane... well... she is one of the best OC's!

Your lemons were great. You should write them more often and maybe add Jane's first time with Khan to the fanfic (I think that would make your story more spicey and sexey!)

I've read the comments and there were some guests who said you did not your research. Please, do not care about them cause this is a fanfiction and you can do with your story what you want.

I kinda hope you write a sequel because I just can't see Khan and Jane apart! And their children! It broke my heart as he deleted her memory.

This was an amazing story I read it for start to end in one sitting. I think my eye's hate me right now.;) I hope you continue whit this.