wow its getting spicy

I find this kinda cool

wow.. amazing

amazing

I can't read any farther then this, but if you're around and see this review - I do suggest upping the rating. Even though it's better then the other fics despite the willing suspense of disbelief issue, it's not something I'd recommend to a thirteen year old to read.

I will admit that the story is better then most "in heat" stories I've come across, but there are two problems with this particular story. First, the concept of being "in heat" is something related to females, and not males, and is based around how the female body works. Second, it doesn't start until after puberty, and six is way to early for Naruto to be in puberty.

Hinata though, her reaction was pretty good at the end, but how did she end up in Naruto's place? Why hasn't this been an issue before.

P.S. I know it's an old story, but I'm reading old stories and reviewing as I read them.

The first two paragraphs sounds like he has a boner.

It's really great story. Oh I really thrilled when Kyubi going to release his 9th tail. I see your story published in 2002 so you've ship this pair so long.. Wonder how you feel when it is a canon in The Last... keep writing

This is the worst thing I ever read .

I was 2 when this was written.. o gosh. O~O I FEEL LIKE A SUCKY AUTHOR

Awwwwww perf ending

Great story though I wish the kissed at the end still great loved reading it

The original NarHina fanfiction. If the first fanfiction was the source of all naruto life then this is the holy grail. I have to say I'm glad that this fic was well written. And to believe this was written when I was 1 years old astounds me

Sopa back digs please

sopa back we need signuters please before march 19 no joke need proff lookit up this sites and other fanbase is at stake