Reviews for Ash and Dawn : The Unova Chapter
Sea Pony chapter 9 . 7/21
They say Ash won't use Creselia because it would be too OP but then proceed to use Pikachu which is probably even more powerful than Creselia at this point.
TheCrazedValkyrie chapter 19 . 7/2
Was that Cilan x Latias right there?
DudeOnFanfiction chapter 1 . 6/16
Killer story, and are there any plans to write anymore?
kat chapter 35 . 5/29
SERIOUSLY! YOU DIDNT & DONT NEED TO FIX THE STORY IT'S GREAT THE WAY IT IS! SO PLEASE ERASE THE "SPECIAL THANKS CHAPTER" & LEAVE IT THE WAY IT IS, & IF I COULD UNDERLINE ALL OF THAT I WOULD! !LEAVE IT AS IS! PLEASE AND THANK YOU!
Goldensilverfox chapter 35 . 5/29
Woah major congrats 1,000,000 reads is a huge accomplishment. I’m so glad this story has truly gotten and is still getting the praise it deserves and although I’m not surprised due to just how great the story and it’s sequel are. I’ll echo a comment from earlier in saying it was truly quite the good surprise to see an update for this story appear in my inbox yesterday I’m really glad you shared this news. I look forward to re reading it at some point soon.
DarkSlash9 chapter 35 . 5/28
Congratulations, man! It was definitely QUITE the delight to see an update for this of all stories in my emails. When I think of fics that inspired me to start writing my own stuff years ago, this is definitely one of the ones that come to mind, and may be one of the only ones I completely remember just by the name. Congrats again, and honestly I think it’s time I reread it :D
UltimateCCC chapter 35 . 5/28
Other than Pearlshipping, which other(s) would you like to see with Ash?
AnonymousTrainer chapter 35 . 5/28
So are you working on a new story? I would love to read more work of the fantastic author you've become
Vankyrs chapter 9 . 5/26
It's not of rating M you could have some changes good but needs improvement..
Guest chapter 34 . 4/27
This was sooo intense! You have amazing storytelling abilities! If only this was happened in the actual amine! Can’t wait to read the sequel!
RandoFox chapter 5 . 2/22
"But had to admit he didn't mind it as much, Snivy did look good" ummm ash, calm down, she's a pokemon... unless your into that?
Guest chapter 34 . 9/8/2019
This was a great story, but I’d like to read more love scenes in Ash and Dawn’s relationship like the title.
Engie main chapter 20 . 9/7/2019
holy fuck
that's nine desths so far and ash has just learned how to aura
Riptide122 chapter 5 . 7/30/2019
Wait you mean to tell me ash isn't as dense as we all think
Guest chapter 29 . 6/30/2019
:( want lemon scenes
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