Getting awesome good can’t wait for more

This is soo good pls write more

A umbrella stitched with elegance? The way you put that is so perfect! I love the way you manage to put such imagery into your work in so few words. And the role call thing was genius. I was so confused before you put the names but after I was able to focus on the story once again.

Thought you should know that the way you started this chapter is the perfect mix of serene and sinister. It both sends shivers down my spine and makes me swoon at the adorableness!

Hmm... I see... makes things much clearer now... thank you...
CHAO!

So much goings on

Thanks for the update :3

Omg all the dolls seem so cute so far I feel bad for the fact that they had to lose their human lives though to become dolls though

Pff oh I like this and aw all the poor children turned into dolls because of one evil dude

Haha, the thought of Ritsu and Misaki finishing each other's sentences is kind of awesome. Interesting story you have going so far.

Queenie

Wow...this is great! I don't mind the AU of the Rozen Maiden, uh, what's an AU by the way? I had been wondering for some time now...Also, please update soon!
CHAO!

Uhh...u lost me at the talking dolls...

Awesome story you have here interesting but can you write down the dolls that each character is assigned to? It gets confusing after awhile trying to link back whose doll belongs to whom.

And the last part when Ritsu meets Takano for their "Date". Is that really Ritsu? If it is, In my opinion, it's a bit fast. I mean, there was no development between the two's relationship and the fact that Ritsu is only capable to step outside once and only a few meters with Takano, it somehow doesn't feel smooth. Especially at the fact that Ritsu met him at the office building. It feels as though the story had progressed without me reading about it and I was then placed smack in the middle of it but ofcourse I'm only assuming if that really IS Ritsu so yeah... It'll be great if you can take the time to express more on each person's story but I know you're focusing on the plotline so it doesn't bother me if you wouldn't want to.

You also keep jumping to different characters after each part and it confuses me so much especially when a new character pops up, there's always a mystery behind it.

I really like how you tie in all the characters together from Sekaiichi Hatsukoi and Junjou Romantica but I only watch Sekaiichi Hatsukoi so that's a fault on my part as I had to search up who's who every few moments in the story.

Okay, so.. In whole, I love your story. The story has a touch of originality I love the suspense, mystery, romance and possible violence. There are a few things you can improve on as I have stated above but it's all in my opinion. You don't have to take them to heart as god knows that I make a lot of mistakes for my fanfics. So all in all, good job. I'd recommend this story to a friend of mine who loves Sekaiichi Hatsukoi and Junjou Romantica Well done :D

Finally I read the next chapter!
I should really slow down on reading everything at once lol
Anyways nice chapter as well as story.
Hope to read more !
Till next time
:)

Oh, kisa... I hope he's okay. Who knows what will happen with two contracts when we don't even know how bad one is yet... Can't wait for more! :)

Oooh Kisa-san youuuu!