Beautiful. I don't get why people are upset about the ending. the ending is perfect. I can see the happiness under the tragedy of it all. good job, author. literally, the only story I didn't cry in

Unexpectedly, I'm feeling deeply sorry for Sebastian! He's in love with a hard-headed, obstinate and ridiculously stubborn Ciel... who wants to die. Yeah... he has his work cut out for him! But, I ended up liking this fic. I never knew being in love could be so... absurdly upsetting and yet, he's in love with Sebastian and I can't help but wonder to what lengths Ciel would go to if he'd ever had to save Sebastian... hope it'd be a wake up call. Anyways, I enjoyed reading this fic, even if the emotions all but pouring from it was a little... vigorously depressing than I'm used to reading.

Ah, this was such a bittersweet story, and so very lovely to read. I admire how you wrote Sebastian's character and his descriptions of love without it being overly sappy. Their relationship was written perfectly in this situation, and I perfectly understood Ciel's motives. Overall, I loved it and I hope to read more.

Sad but i loved it

Ah~ I love bittersweet endings. poor ciel, even more poor Sebastian.

I do hope they reconcile, after they have all of eternity together.

Hmm, I love how u don't put much smut into this fic, tho you do mention it. but it just enhances ur description of Sebastian's growing feelings for ciel. I love it.

I want to say (type) before I get started on this review that I normally don't do very long or detailed reviews so feel blessed.~

I AM PLEASED WITH THE ENDING OF THIS FAN-FIC AND ENJOYED IT! I liked how Ciel's and Sebby's feelings are all reversed and twisted in this story. Sebastian a demonic being from Hell feeling human emotions and turning human-like himself. Feeling love for a human, the one who is his meal, food, his master. All while Ciel grows even more spiteful, sadistic, cold-blooded, his heart more guarded than ever (and literally like ice I may add), melancholic, craving for Sebastian's touch much more fiercely (even tho he loathes himself for it), and stubborn (yay!). Like they say the heart grows fonder when away.~ But Sebby you are a big, loved, idiot for loving a human. Its a dangerous and deadly game. But you win the game anythings earning your prize, Ciel. The newly reborn demon.
I know now why emotions are a curse (especially for a demon), why they choose not to feel, because feeling is painful, reminds them of the past, is deadly, and just brings tragedy (of course it does). Love too is a curse, a beautiful, twisted, interesting, curse. I feel sorry for Sebby how his lover wishes die so much that he dreams of it. How even tho he promises to not bring him harm he's hurting him just keeping him alive, its twisted. I feel for Ciel too, because I myself have wished the for same thing, death upon myself. But I'm glad Sebby saved him (again), and made him a demon. If he did die Sebastian would be all alone (again), which I don't want to happen. And that outcome just is painful (and I don't like pain). Besides Ciel too precious for Hell's wrath and flames, and Sebastian gets to be with him until the end of time (Yay! Go Sebaciel!.) . I question what I would do in Sebastian place (and Ciels). What would I do differently and what I would do the same?
Now tho time for the eh... cons of this fan-fic. Firstly lots of spelling errors. But don't worry grammar and spelling improves with time and practice. Here are some tips, use a spell checker (and grammar checker), ask help for family or friends, and just continue writing. The next 'con' is the characters were very OCC. I personally don't mind characters being altered or being eh, different than from their original personality. But other people not so much like this. Just warn about OCC characters in the summary so people know. Lastly little to no sex scenes. Okay this is not really a 'con' more a desire or complaint but still. I wished for more smut and sex, not just it being skipped over... *blushes*.
*coughs* But yes I enjoyed the refreshing alter in feelings of Ciel and Sebby. Its good for a change for Sebastian to feel love and just act human-like!
Also want to say this fan-fic has given me a idea for a fic of my own, so thanks for that.. Just I loved the insanity, and twist-fulness of this fan-fic. so twisted... It makes my heart hurt.
~SoulRain :3

It was too obvious. The writing quality is poor and is something I would expect an eleven year old to be capable of writing. You have many grammar mistakes along with spelling mistakes. Your characters are ridiculously ooc and quite pathetic. They show very little emotion and just make the audience feel awkward. Your language use is simple and I felt insulted as I read through it; it was like it was written for an audience of idiots. The only Dreaded Feeling present was the dread of realising that there was another chapter

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Such a beautiful story, it was a delight to read. :-)

Nice :3 SOOOOOOOOOO nice *.* Thank you a million times

great ending! i think after some time-ciel will forgive sebastian but sebby will have to be perpared for a little bad time

something will happen to break their quiet time(lizzie again?)

Such a beautiful story, I love the way you portraid Sebastian and how he feels.

poor guys! ciel has been f;d over(he feels by sebastian)7 is ready to die to end it all