Reviews for The Picture
dondena chapter 23 . 9/7/2018
Awesome story! Happy for him that he was reunited with his original family too, along with his second one.
dondena chapter 22 . 9/7/2018
I know Randall would have a good singing voice if he tried. His voice actor can sing good. Glad he's getting the life he truly wanted.
dondena chapter 20 . 9/4/2016
Please make a new chap soon. I want to see what happens with Randall and Mrs. Waternoose. From the heart monitor going off at the end, it seems like she might be trying to kill him. Lucky he was awake. But please update soon. Must know what happened.
Mikell chapter 15 . 10/17/2015
You finally update and you leave off THERE?

I hope a new chapter's coming!

Mary
WritingforChrist chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
I've been following this story since about January. It is probably one of the best Randall fanfics I have read. Please update soon!

PS. Can I use your idea about reptiles being ovoviviparous in my Randall story and it being dangerous for the egg to hatch inside the body? I'd never really thought about this concept before, but it makes sense, considering that Randall's a reptile.
Julianne chapter 14 . 5/21/2015
This is a really good story! Put oh ether nicely! Love the plot and you keep everyone in character. I cried during several parts in the story! Good job, I can't wait for the next chapter!
EmilyAnaya19 chapter 14 . 3/27/2015
Aaaahhhhhhh! Such a great update update soon omg loved it!
Mikell chapter 14 . 3/27/2015
Oh come on seriously? You leave off THERE after waiting so long to update?

I hope you're writing... Don't make me send Sully after you! *looks ominous*
LOL

Seriously, great update. Can't wait to see how you spin this tale.

Mary
BadgerWolf chapter 12 . 11/10/2013
I seem to be a little late to this party, but I want to leave my thoughts nonetheless. You've made me laugh, you've made me cry, and you've made me shake my head in embarrassment in situations I can relate to. There's not many stories out there I can say have done that to me quite so often, so I'd like to congratulate you on a job very well done so far.

I love the fact you've given even more of a link between Randall and Sulley, in the form of Callie. You gave Randall a comfortable home life, a child, and just overall true happiness... And you tore it all away from him, making his character so much more tragic, and yet more forgivable for his actions in MI. And you've even given more strength to his hatred for, and rivalry with Sulley. You've laid every single one of his emotions bare, and still made him believable.

Very well done on the story so far, and I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the fantastic work.
AutumnnPrincess chapter 12 . 11/2/2013
That's very good! Loved Randall's first try in making a kid laugh, that was hilarious:) I don't even feel sorry for poor Mike xD

Are you posting this story for the second time or something? You write a lot about changes in the chapters. Unfortunately, I can't tell whether the changes are making the story better, since I haven't read the original versions of your chapters; I stumbled across this story a couple of months ago, so this is the first time I read it.

I'm here waiting for your next update:)
Night-Waker chapter 11 . 10/11/2013
CALLLLLLLLLIE! DX

I knew it would be sad, though it's going to be interesting to see what happens from here now that we're back in the present.
StanleyLaurel.ArthurJefferson chapter 11 . 10/5/2013
Great chapter! Soo sad. I'm sorry that Callie died :( poor Randall. Well an amazing chapter as always! :) can't wait for the next one
AutumnnPrincess chapter 11 . 10/5/2013
This is so sad! Poor Randall, and poor Callie:( I can see why Randall grew all bitter now..!
I hope things will get better in the future, and that he'll find a new reason to live:) I can't wait for the next chapter!

AutumnnPrincess (who's too lazy to log in)
AutumnnPrincess chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
So sad:( So so soooo sad:(
Words can't describe how sorry I feel for Randall. And emphaty normally isn't my strongest side, so you've done a great job making me (and probably everyone else reading this story) feel for, and whit, the characters! Keep up the good work:)
StanleyLaurel.ArthurJefferson chapter 10 . 9/30/2013
Oh NOOOOOOOO! Here comes the sad part :( can't wait for the next chapter. Ill have a box of tissues next to me
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