| Reviews for Twilight - What if? |
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   corkykellems chapter 18 . 1/31/2015 Really enjoying this story...hope You plan to Finish it |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 18 . 7/15/2014 Well done I love it. |
| teamjacob0729 chapter 17 . 3/16/2014 Looking forward to an update of all your OC, but especially Jake & Bella. Love the bossy Jake. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 17 . 3/11/2014 Well done. Please space the lines out. Makes it easier to follow. |
| ShadoDncr chapter 17 . 3/9/2014 It's a good story, but you might want to check your formatting on Ch. 17. It's appearing as one single paragraph. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 16 . 1/11/2014 Well done I love it. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 15 . 12/10/2013 That was a marvelous chapter I love it. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 14 . 12/10/2013 Cool. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 13 . 12/10/2013 Oh boy now what. Awesome story so far. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 12 . 12/10/2013 That was awesome. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 11 . 12/10/2013 That was wonderful. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 10 . 12/10/2013 Awesome. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 9 . 12/10/2013 Marvelous chapter I love it. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 8 . 12/10/2013 Well done that was great. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 7 . 12/10/2013 Fabulous chapter I love it. |
