Eeep i love all of your stories

great story ! thank you!

My boyyysss

Poor Sirius. I love your writing (yet again), and the Potters are great!

Lol, I loved that you had the red-haired thing be a Potter Syndrom.

I think the part that firmly established in my head that Dorea and Charlus are amazing decent people were when she said about Noddy "If she's managed to sleep through this, she deserves to stay where she is".

A great, very gripping short-story. Congrats.

Please keep going with this : the writing is excellent & it’s building beautifully !

Good story. Tells quite a lot about why Sirius left home and never went back. His parents are total creeps. Who would use the Unforgivables on a child!

uncomfortable much.
the wand snapping surprised me a bit as i thought it takes more than physical strength to break one.
nice short though.

I know you wrote this almost four years ago, but I am just now reading it. I really enjoyed it. I think this is the best reason for Sirius running away that I have ever read and I like thinking that Regulus didn't really want to join the death eaters. There is no mention of Sirius' and Regulus' relationship in the book. You did a great job portraying it the way you did.

"I'll take care of him. I'll feed him..." Cracked me up.

Another wonderful story,

Heartful and heart stopping.

Kahuffstix

I absolutely love this. I positively can't say anything negative or something to improve on. Only that I hope you write one of the marauder's lives.

This was sweet

This was really good. I think I've said that before...

And it fits well in with canon and your Innocent series. Really, you're just a good writer.

Perfect. I loved the Reg & Sirius convo...and then James and Sirius! Oh...
Characterisations, again, all of them! :D