Loved loved loved this story. Thank you. Most enjoyable. Loved the relationship with J and S.

Ack. To be loved like that.

Oh God I love this so mucg. I love me a conflicted Jareth.

Loving this.

Hmmm Sarah has told Derrick she loves him twice now and he has not responded in like. Unsure if that's a star wars reference or if I should be looking deeper into this.

I'm really enjoying this. I laughed so much when Derrick and Sarah were making out and Jareth kept trying to disrupt them. Hahahahaha. The my little pony in his hair. Oh boy.

Loved it! Thank you!

This was wonderful!

Wow! that was beautiful! Thank you so much!

I really love this story so far!

I liked it.

I wish we could read POV Jareth too. Your story is magnificent.

I like your story and this pair.

I just read this story & couldn't put it down! I read it within a day! I absolutely love love love how you portrayed Sarah's character because it's definitely a fresh breath of air to read a story where she's NOT made out to be a nasty bitch! She's a stubborn & passionate young woman; not nasty & ungrateful & I've read a few stories where the writer is either trying too hard, or its just my perception. Of course I love how you made Jareth! Their relationship was all around captivating & I couldn't put the story down. It's a shame it was only 19 chapters Maybe you can do a sequel ? I don't know if you have one, or started one; but if you haven't - I definitely think this story would make a great sequel!

Such a lovely take. Love it. _