nice job!

Great story bro wish to see more stories frok u

that was good keep the chapters coming

well another cool story a nice battle and another great lemon nice work

Such a Good lemon

Pretty good.

part 2? where she is pregnant and give birth to them?

And here I thought a priestess was supposed to be an example of purity and holiness, but damn it all if Naruto didn't change Shion's way of thinking and converted her into a lustful, cum thirsty slut with the subtlety of a sledgehammer.

Well I've got to hand it to you DC316, the level of lust and desire in this fic just shot straight through the roof even if it's one of your earlier works. This will probably get many more read overs since Shion's demeanor is kind of similar to that of my lavender eyed goddess Hinata except for the shyness and constant fainting spells.

And let it never be said that your stories are all about the sex. You always try to put a little plot in the mix before we are treated to an act of epic carnal knowledge. Some authors would try and just let Naruto and Shion have a sexual marathon with very little rhyme or reason, but it's nice you go the extra mile and add some style to the substance. Besides you can't have any dessert without dealing with the main course now can you?

I will try and check out your other lemons(that is in between my sessions with Saints Row 3 & 4). The next one I read will be the one with that ninja girl Shizuka who was trying to get Naruto to fight for her hand or some jazz like that, and the good lord willing that story will be every bit as freaky as this one was(oh who am I kidding, of course it will you rascal you;). Until next time, this is SV33 signing off.

Love the story. For the naruto and ino lemon story, have naruto and kurama allow ino to take over naruto body, so they can take turns screwing ino' motionless body after the first round of sex. Like the the idea?

Nice. Both kinds of actions in the chapter.

Haha great stuff.

-IR

Can you please do a Fu and/or Guren one. There aren't really alot

Nice job again
Could you add mabui or fu and yugito in your stories please

Aw man, another great work from you, master. I was just think if you could add Kurotsuchi, that would be awesome.

great story by the way u ever thought of doin 1 for shizune or guren and if u ever doin crossover ones can u try it with soifon (BLEACH) azula (AVATAR LAST AIR BENDER) or inner moka (ROSERIOVAMPIRE)