learn how human emotions work dumb bitch

But truth be told, he couldn't find it in his heart to blame them, because he felt more pride knowing his parents were pirates than he would have ever felt if they wasted their lives in this town

...WTF? What kind of kid is fine with their parents ditching them? Hell, if I ever saw my parents after growing up like that, and they were on fire, I wouldn't even piss on them to put them out. F*ck them.

Well, you also nerfed Logia fruits too. I've noticed it a few times, but it wasn't until now that you truly drew attention to it. Naruto shouldn't have been hurt at all by the explosion. If anything, he should've been able to use his powers to exert some control over it, and even if he couldn't, he's intangible.

Robin's power seems terrible, despite your attempts to build it up. When she grabbed Naruto (and should she attempt to grab anyone similar in the future) he could've literally crippled her for life by burning her arms off. It seems like a terrible downside to a Devil Fruit power, especially considering most Devil Fruits only have one drawback. It's a needless attempt to nerf an already under-powered Devil Fruit.

Hm it's a sugestion but can he have Kryptonian powers ? Ex: He is LITERALY a sun man
It's a explendid fanfic please continue!

It's nice to see this again!

Great job with the story so far. I like how you're incorperating the characters from naruto into here and not just doing a copy paste from one show to another. Take as much time as needed to get chapters done the way you like, if you like it them your readers should undoubtedly like it as well.

Awesome story glad its back i really like the whole concept of it

Wow, this story looks really interesting. Please continue!

Nice chapter

The interactions between Robin and Naruto are so cute. Good start

Hmmmm... interesting but I have a few questions and statements...
1. Will he have his own crew? I don't really like the ones where he joins luffy...
2. Will he gain a second devil fruit like Blackbeard? If so what lightning? Wind/sky? Or hanzo's poison?
3. Will lightning burn him as it's hotter than Our sun? through you could promise other sun's hotter and negate this weakness.
4. Will sea stone really be a weakness to him as he could probably melt it before it comes in contact with him?.

Soooo good! I was hoping there would be another good naruto/one piece crossover so thanks a lot and I can't wait till the next chapter️ few minor grammatical errors but nothing major.

You're back!

And the Face of Today is? Rouge Marine!

So now we know what is going on and the back story. I'm glad you updated and our back in the game. I look forward to the next part.