Reviews for Evenstar
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 3/27/2017
nice job
DianaChaseKirkland chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Lovely...just lovely. And I really liked how you wrote it. It's a bit hard ti get tinto Arwen's mind and portray ver thoughts, bit you did it quite well. Nice job ;)
Thranduil's Party Moose VIII chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Awwww . . . Very sweet.
Emzieluvsbooks chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Oh I love it. I love is so much. It's so sweet and I love you're writing style and it was just beautiful. I really liked how you insinuated that elves can see love. One of the best only-a-couple-hundred-words-one-shots that I have read so awesome job.
lindahoyland chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
What a lovely glimpse of Aragorn and Arwen! I can well imagine that sometimes he would feel weary and worn down by his burdens, but with Arwen's love he can rule wisely and well.
Elvish Cupcake chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Thus had a nice, touching ending :) I love your way of describing things, people and everything in general, and you have a beautiful way with the language! Keep up the wonderful work!
HermioneSpencer chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
OMG you have an amazing talent for writing and it is so easy to read and i just get lost in the atmosphere that you have created with your words! You are really really amazing and i cannot wait to read more of your writing!

Thanks for posting this story and I hope that there are many more stories to come!
HermioneSpencer :)
Wordspin chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
My, this is one of the most beautiful pieces I've read in some time. Quite lovely, so very realistic, with such vivid imagery. I imagine Aragorn would get tired of his kingly duties every once and a while (maybe even more frequently), and no doubt Arwen would pick up on that. You did a wonderful job expanding on the subject, showing the feelings of both Elessar and Evenstar.
Also, beautiful story image!

Certh
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Oh my gosh! So beautiful and so realisistic, too! Thank you, that made my day! Lovely story! :)
shortttttttttttt chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
why is it so short...
ok nzl nice work
Doctor Legolas chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Aww, so sweet! I can't wait for the next chapter! How did you change the photo for the story? Because don't you have a different photo for the Love of the Eldar? Anyway, great chapter! Please continue!
Elves are awesome chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
great! you are such an awesome author! i can imagine aragorn losing the part of him that is the ranger when he is stuck being king. yet again great work mellon-nin
My Dear Frodo chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
I like it! Good writing! I just want to point out that you said, "He shuts off the flickering light," and I'm not sure if you meant that it was a candle or something, because it kind of sounds like you're talking about a light switch, and they don't have those in Middle Earth, unless I completely missed something.
brankel1 chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Fantastic.
LegolasGreenleafLove chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Aw that was so sweet! Great job!
LegolasGreenleafLove
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