Great intro! Kinda short but to the point.

I think you should make Hanabi Hinata's twin! Then you could possible do twin stuff!

I love this story, I'm excited to see what happens next

Great story update soon please!

Just so you are aware, the civilian council does not exist in Naruto. It is a fan made addition.

Hmm, a nice story so far I can't wait to see more of it so keep up the great work!

Hey its about kyubi when i research. who is misaki akari i found her who is actress of jav video. Now answer me the truth

I have a few fanfics on this site myself that aren't finished either, and I have lost interest in writing them honestly. Life has gotten me in its grasp. However, I would like to inform you that I have enjoyed reading this fanfic so far and I look forward to the web of tales it will bring in the future. I find it rather interersting and rather... Hmm... I wouldn't say odd per say, but unique or different is a word I would use for it, and as I tell the people I know, different and unique are not necessarily bad things. Change is something hard for us as a race find difficult, but I believe that it is something that we need to learn to embrace. Especially in things like this. I'm not much of a NaruSaku fan myself, but as I told a dear friend of mine, If Masashi Kishimoto decides to pair them together, then that is his decision to make as the creator of the series. However, I am a fan of the other pairings you did, although the NaruTen is rather weird, but not necessarily a bad thing either. Dawn is a hoot character, although I would have liked to have seen a female Sasuke instead cause I enjoy that little plot twist, I respect your decision none the less and encourage you to continue to do things your way. I would also like to wish you much luck in writing and having a wonderful, happy, and love filled life.

you keep mentioning the six paths thin, meaning the other bodies, like that's actually integral to the rinnegan. The rinnegan doesn't include those other bodies at all. Thos only became necessary because nagato was so physically damaged he couldn't move around on his own to use his powers. He NEEDED the artificial bodies and likely no one meat puppet could handle all the power nagato himself held. So he had to split it up.

holy FUCK, fucking separate the goddamn AN's from the rest of the story jesus fucking christ

Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope thatit is as good as this one.

Cool chapter continue please.

So the harem is misaki, hinata, hanabi, sakura, ino, yakumo, dawn, isarabi and ayame in the harem? If so the awesome! Love the story so far.

This wasn't too bad of a start.

Curious to see how things turn out moving forward and such. As for pairings, they look pretty solid. Sadly, you said the "Ice Queens" were off limits. Shame too, because I am a bit of a fan of Anko/Naruto, but I digress.

Can't really think of anyone to add, unless you make Haku female.

At any rate, going to put this story on follow, for when you get around to updating it.

I have loved this story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

lmao omg that last part was funny as hell i just wish i new who the ANBU was.